Nice soundscapes you've created here, definitely hearing more of the sonic youth inflence here, reminds me a bit of animal collective too. I love the vocal fx, real unconventional, I dig it.
I love the collaboration of this strange and menacing melodie and your kind of singing...
Gonna listen to this song drunken, I´m sure it will be an awesome feeling ;)
Hey, you made a nice piece of music. ;) It's not for everybody, sounds a bit psychedelic and strange sometimes but all in all nice.
some points for the next time.
- the sound qualitiy is really good, keep on doing like this!
- take more time to practise the guitar parts, some times it's not in time.
- where is the bass guitar?
thank you my friend for taking the time to listen and review.my music is usually not for everybody.lol.have not laid down the bass for it and am still learning to play and always forget what i just finished playing.
Well, first off, in my personal opinion you had way to many effects going on here. There is a saying in the world of producing when you apply to many effects to an acoustic piece, it's called "polishing a turd"
Now please keep in my mind I do NOT think your song "is crap" in fact the chords are nice, and I can tell it was hard for you to sing, but you did it anyway, so props there.
Another thing that really took this down was the guitar. It was out of tune, or at least one of the higher strings was. I couldn't tell what chords you were playing, beacuse of all the effects, but perhaps something like a D, it sounded off. This is normally not a problem in the world of music, just when you show other musicians your stuff, you have to the "ear" for it.
Overall I must give you props, but in my book, this needs some serious work. I know you stated it's not done, so I look forward to seeing the finished product.
-Angelus
P.S. I'm sorry if I came off mean, I wasn't trying to be.
wow your right i didnt even tune the guitar that day you have a great ear my friend.yes maybe one day i will finish this song(when i get better hahaha)thanks for the review i appreciate the honesty.
Sounds slightly bland if i'm honest, i liked you're vocals although they need some work too. I liked the part at 3;06 when the song cut out and then kicked back in again. Good effort!
Well I wont lie some of the singing vocals are a little rough, off tune in a few parts. But I do like the screaming parts. Overall pretty good. Thanks for using my song :)
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Gonna listen to this song drunken, I´m sure it will be an awesome feeling ;)
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some points for the next time.
- the sound qualitiy is really good, keep on doing like this!
- take more time to practise the guitar parts, some times it's not in time.
- where is the bass guitar?
but again, all in all it's nice. :)
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Well, first off, in my personal opinion you had way to many effects going on here. There is a saying in the world of producing when you apply to many effects to an acoustic piece, it's called "polishing a turd"
Now please keep in my mind I do NOT think your song "is crap" in fact the chords are nice, and I can tell it was hard for you to sing, but you did it anyway, so props there.
Another thing that really took this down was the guitar. It was out of tune, or at least one of the higher strings was. I couldn't tell what chords you were playing, beacuse of all the effects, but perhaps something like a D, it sounded off. This is normally not a problem in the world of music, just when you show other musicians your stuff, you have to the "ear" for it.
Overall I must give you props, but in my book, this needs some serious work. I know you stated it's not done, so I look forward to seeing the finished product.
-Angelus
P.S. I'm sorry if I came off mean, I wasn't trying to be.
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