I think you got a great 4-bar loop there, and you definitely include some nice further elements, so it's not just a repeat. But to really keep the interest of the listener, it would be good to introduce another melody; switch it up a bit more.
Good luck, I think you habe a great start here and well done!
on Wed 13 by FELmaster
on Wed 13 by FELmaster
Good luck, I think you habe a great start here and well done!