Th3Coalition

very, very good sound

I like it great job keep going!

I'm thinking a Rita and Ed combo.

I love it apart from the vocals that come in at around 1.38. then later on. i feel they need to be straight without to many effects. Other than that this is a hit my friend.

hi dude! rather chill at the beginning, in any case very well built your composition!
Michel

ohh ! good work!! it sound good.....

Mix and master is clean. Message is clear. Nice work!

Applause, applause, applause, applause.....

I agree with some of the constructive critism of some previous posts but I assure you still did a good job on this track. I enjoyed it. We all work to grow everyday.

There is not much to criticize. …good work ! Only .. the deep voice clashes with the verse in some parts ..

Yea bruh, this hittin...

the hook is great. I wish you would let the drums ride through the 1st verse. other than that the track is fire. keep it up, dude.

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HMU if u wanna collab

i'm gonna be straight forward. I never liked hip hop but this sounded great. its like a hybrid of old school hip hop (I think i'm no expert) and the new age stuff and its brilliant. its like you combined my favorite elements from the old and new stuff and put it in a blender. i like it! keep at it and hopefully through out time you'll make it.

Bro wtf this actually sounds incredible

This is a trap beat but it feels like a 90s 2000s rap song, amazing work

I don't have much criticism, I genuinely like it man

Hey there
first of all, the song sounds very well mixed and mastered! The beat and the flows sound damn nice too. The only problem I have is with the arrangement of the transition to the first verse. In the beginning I expected the drop after "how many times do I gotta tell you" and this, I think, took away a whole lot of energy you built up in the intro. But thats the only thing I have to criticise (and maybe its only me that's bothered by it :D). Overall, its a good song!

Wow DGutta
RIP JonJon
This song is Powerful
I'm a music producer from Arkansas (Little Rock)
Would love to work with you~

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Let's get it!

oh & Keep the FAITH
It'S ALL THAT MATTERZ

it's amazing , i love it ;)

This is hot! Strong lyrics and vocals. Track is nice, did you create the track?

Ronabo

This is some intense songwriting. I can feel the emotion building with every verse. And the hook cuts deep.

TA

I can't pinpoint who but your voice sounds like a major artist I've heard before. You definitely went in on this. The topic of the song is something I'm passionate about so I'm glad to see another guy speaking up on it. Keep it up!

- Billion

P.S if you could leave some feedback on the track I put recently that would be greatly appreciated.

This is a powerful track. The honest emotions pack a strong impact. Love the phat bass. Nice atmosphere. Beginning works well. My only advice is keep doin' it.

Good work! Nice hook, went in on verses.

you sound great on the track man
im lovin this song
so good
really fuck with it
hook is so fitting
amazing track
keep it up foreal
-CAP

Yo, D you done did it again mane! Thats a tight concept and trax brah 100

fuck yeah bro. this is hardd. your lyrics are fire, kind of reminds me of jay rock on autotune. beat is flame, chorus is super smooth. i like it a lot. keep it up