mistafadden

Skope is ignorant!!!!

This shot is tight as hell, friend! I like the wobble a lot. Real Grime-step. This track is very well put together for a first track. I have to agree with dbl on the bass. If you create holes in the bass it does intensify it's inevitable return. Other than that this is an exceptional track!

Cheers Friend!

@KAos: ROFLMAO!

daaaam I was just thinkin about sampling some chopper the other day, guess you beat me to it. Might still av a go myself but.

Im digggin the wobble. but yeah the track does sound a bit hollow, maybe try and add some effects or different layers to add a bit more texture to the overall sound. You can use anything really, I cut up a dogs bark the other day in one my tunes, added a bit of distortion and ran it through some filters, made for a very nasty sound.

try and layer your sounds a bit the reverb on the clap is nice but maybe layer another snare or a tiny snippet white noise along with it, to get that nice kinda smack inyaface sound.

The vocal sample might go well if its just by itself, then BAM! dropp the bass and drums in ;)

You've got a good foundation here but, keep at it mate :)

its a good song man, just need to change it up alittle to keep me on my toes.

Sorry I got all carried away in responding to the forum I forgot to leave a review! this track was produced well and sounded clean and professional ! before looperman I never knew these different genres existed! I have learned so much being here on looperman it has made me open my mind to so many different styles and genres!
thank god for looperman and thank god for all of the extreme talent here! JG

Granted this is my opinion and i am just one in the masses here on looperman! as well as the guy with the hatred or out of line review
he is but one! a grain of salt so to speak! now do I listen to dubstep? no! but if I review a genre that is not one of my usual genres of choice I rate the song on production mixing and sound! it may not be a genre i like but I can still review it on quality alone I don't have to like it to review it! on the other hand if I come across a track that is mixed poorly or is not produced properly do i give it a negative review? no I usually just walk away as not to offend anyone!

one thing to remember to use even the negative criticism as stepping stones for progress !

Johnny Gadget
Gadgetland Music Factory

Yo fam' I don't know what that fool below
is smoking but I like this track
imma not a dubstep follower
but I like that BASS!

KEEP IT UP BRO

Respect from LA

who is scope???????can we roast him ?????ill help bro.....

be safe and keep um grimefull......i like this ....

hahahahahahaha !sparta!
the only thing i could say.....the syncopation could be tighter....but thats my taste....

oh ..@skope.......ill roast you......because of your closed mind......dont be mean here on looperman,we are all friends,and to say organised sound "not music"....is offensive(no offense).
"smiles and hands you cookie"
go read a book or something

oh and i forgot to say,
mr fadden,good job ......you get a beer!

nice track man, really diggin your wobbles, but yea like others said, there's a lot of empty space here, understandable cause it sounds good as is, but you could throw in more sfx to really beef it up, maybe a section that's a bit more melodic as well... either way, good stuff man!

i mean no offense bro, but is this really ment ta be music?

like it it is nicly composed...you should put more instruments for me this is a bit empty...nice work

rocky produstion

This is a cool track, but it feels like its missing something, I think you could add more to this as far as the beat is concerned like some glitchy breaks or sliced noise samples(?)

Kevin

interesting track,nice wobble bass,not so dirty its ok!
Just maybe to put stronger kick and snare,then be expressed better the whole beat!
good job m8!

keep up!

9R