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I love the beat and melody of the track. I think creating a track to your lover is always a great thing to do. Always a plus with me. I like your voice. The whole thing is very catchy. Congrats on baby number 2.

Keep it up, my friend.

i like the way you set up the song with the dialogue at the beginning. when the harmony and strings come in at the chorus it is amazing. i relax with this song from beginning to end. you bring in brass sounds near the end which is perfect. you color with some closed high hat? sidestick? don't know exactly what but it is tasteful.
take for what it worth: i vocalize every day to be hitting the notes dead on in pitch, to find as much resonance in my voice as possible
i believe you should demo this song out. one more thing - think about your ending.
good luck with this! midisparks

pretty solid lyrics. holla if u want to colab
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This is how Barry Gordy got rich. colab at its finest. the right music for the right artist.you put it down on this one. i love the vocal harmonies.you didn't over do it. and the concept is off the chain. great work. PEACE.THE MACK MAN OUT.

I Love the way you set the story up on this 1 man. Tight subject matter.

J,this is hot man. the beat is write on it. the vocal delivery is great,and the Jamaican flavor is hittin hard personaly i think the mix is good,and let'a not forget,once the mastering engineer gets done it's over. no better way to prove love to a wife.go mane.PEACE.THE MACK MAN OUT.

ill work, the mix of the song is the only thing i;d change but definately great lyrics and flow GO DEE JAY, Bless up

Slick track man. You sound like rock city at the start. Nice seeing rappers using there own accent and not trying to imitate. Solid songwriting as well. You have talent!

Wow man. The vocals were great, lyrics were solid. Its great that you didn't take any emotion away from the track.It went the direction I wanted this track to go but you made it own which is one of the hardest things to do.
Big respect man, you totally did this track justice!

Perfect voices for a song soft and velvety. Good job.

nice song man ! very sentimental good vocals...

J-i dont hear a lot of Jamaican rappers on the loop so keep um comin cause this is good flavor in rap. i like the concept. i know where you commin from on this track. good stuff pimp.PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT.