pashkita

I like your ideas. Though, you should consider some of tipps:
Your 808 is nice, but at the döö du dö dü part (0:55) you could´ve made them a bit longer, it sounds too hectic. I tend to do mine between 1/8. or 1/4. Your kick could need some distortion and let it sit at around -3db. 808 can be at (-9)-(-12minimum). Hope my advice can be of help too you.

This is very nice track. Love that kick and bass sounds. I usually like sparse mixes but this one could use another instrument like strings. Not that is not good as is, I just could hear it in my head when I was listening to your song. And also vocals of course. Would sound fantastic with vocals. You did great.

Cool track, friend! The distorted keyboards at the beginning give this piece an almost spooky atmosphere, then when the other instruments come in it's full of surprises.