I did not expect the change at 1:20, good ideas here.
The degree of distortion you have put on the "808" diminishes it's ability to be picked up on my subs. You may want to consider listening to this in a car, or a stereo with subs. Studio headphone may not give you the information you need (due to a lack of "airspace").
Also, when the swells come in (later in the track) it looks like you may have too much total volume causing clipping distortion. Dialing the tracks back to -6 to -18 dB will help Maximus run better (if you are using it). Let the compression/saturation increase the perceived loudness, instead of relying on volume.
Just a couple things, I'm no expert. Good ideas with this track; I like the synth twist on typical trap.
That bass is killer. I liked how you structured the sounds and brought everything in. I would love to hear how a drill rap artist would sound on this. I hope you find someone. By the way the Egyptian sound that came in around 0:59 seconds was a nice touch and good change up. Good one.
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(edit 4.2.22: can you delete my previous comment?)
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The degree of distortion you have put on the "808" diminishes it's ability to be picked up on my subs. You may want to consider listening to this in a car, or a stereo with subs. Studio headphone may not give you the information you need (due to a lack of "airspace").
Also, when the swells come in (later in the track) it looks like you may have too much total volume causing clipping distortion. Dialing the tracks back to -6 to -18 dB will help Maximus run better (if you are using it). Let the compression/saturation increase the perceived loudness, instead of relying on volume.
Just a couple things, I'm no expert. Good ideas with this track; I like the synth twist on typical trap.
I hope this information helps.
Keep it up.
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hats off, Danke