I'm not too good in advices cause music is absolutely subjective...
but in this case, I'm tryin...:-)
if I were you I would surely changed that 'type-writer' kinda hi-hat sound...it's a bit irritative for more than 2 mins...also that pad...it's a cool idea but not for that long...try to get another part, and more instruments...I know that lo-fi isn't a progressive genre but more is needed...:-)
look after in this site, the leader track in the lo-fi can give you tips...that's an outstanding song from elijahbcrouch...
on cant wait to leave by Klinokee
on cant wait to leave by Klinokee
Danke
on cant wait to leave by Klinokee
I'm not too good in advices cause music is absolutely subjective...
but in this case, I'm tryin...:-)
if I were you I would surely changed that 'type-writer' kinda hi-hat sound...it's a bit irritative for more than 2 mins...also that pad...it's a cool idea but not for that long...try to get another part, and more instruments...I know that lo-fi isn't a progressive genre but more is needed...:-)
look after in this site, the leader track in the lo-fi can give you tips...that's an outstanding song from elijahbcrouch...
handshake, Danke