RitajustRita

"Alle tranen die ik om jou, om jou gelaten heb,
is nu verleden tijd.
Eindelijk weer vrij."
Heb ik iets gemist?

Hello Mom, Such a beautiful songwonderful melody, and so well and emotionally sung. I absolutely love it! Sending you lots of love, Your little one

I felt that the music has a happy tone, not by chance... but as if to echo the new joyful mood and the feeling of a new freedom after the end of a bad relationship. Only the tone of your sweet voice Rita reveals the old sadness that slowly fades and disappears... The chord progression and the melody lines are extremely successful ... extremely !!! Cheers...

Allo Rita, I like your Voice in Dutch or English, it's very pleasant. The song seems so happy and cheerful, but the subject matter is dark. Those are the juxtapositions I love when Artists do that. And yes this has now elevated you to artist status! I also love the abrupt ending. You get a Fav from me tonight.

Yes Rita of course I understand this is the meaning of your song...and that is why it is so uplifting. It's just the expression "destroyed", to my ears it's something final and permanent. Of course we talk about rising from our ashes but would be easier if it just was "I 've suffered your narcistic behavior". It is just an opinion. Your song is really beautiful.
Best regards, Anthony

The song is so refreshing for what has to do with the music and the vocals. I am a bit concerned with the lyrics and I will explain myself. I it so uplifting you leave every pain behind and this is the story telling of your excellent music, but I really thing that singing repeatedly "I am destroyed by your narcistic behavior" leaves only a small room to be happy. Please reconsider the expression "destroyed", leave some space for joy to come.
I firstly listened to the song and then read the lyrics and I wanted so much to tell you my opinion.
Best regards, Anthony

Good job Rita! You succeed to infuse your emotions in song very well. Lyrics are good. Love this!

Oh, ik dacht dat je iemand van hier bij LM bedoelde

Hello RitajustRita, pretty cool 80s pop sound, I read the lyrics in english for translation and tried my best to follow while listening for a better understanding and enjoyed it even more....great work my friend.

This reminds me of Gilbert O'Sullivan style pop - refreshingly different

Ik ben nog steeds nieuwsgierig!

Hey Rita - I felt a touch of Simple Minds and an 80s feel in here - weird or not, it is wonderful

Hello RitajustRita, interesting and imaginative....good beat to go with that voice, sometimes its the minimals in a track that shine through....good job my friend.

the production is neat right here

Love your beat and of course your voice! Great job Rita! I like it very much. Cheers.

Thanks for letting me know.

Another great track rita your vocals are becoming stronger and stronger i enjoyed my listen :)

Hi Rita , it sounds amazing !! The beat ,the music and mainly the meaning of the song have perfectly suited your voice !! Cheers !!

I look forward to your music. You've come out of your shell and sound amazing.
Is Dimestop alright he hasn't been on the discord.

Nice mellow vocals, blended nicely with the beat, keep it coming

Hello Mom, First of all, what an amazing song! The music, vocals, mix, and master are all truly impressive. The lyrics, which I assume have an authentic connection to reality and your life, are also very well writtenthey fit beautifully with both the vocals and the music. The emotions really come through.

Id be very curious to know who you mean by "other people."

Sending love, Your little one

Hello RitajustRita, just enjoyed your track, your voice sort of gives you the feeling in this track that if you screw up you gonna get just what you're asking for and it ain't good.....your vocals are always great to hear. The music matches the lyrics and tone of this piece very well.

I love it! Your voice is awesome. Good job Rita!

Dark lyrics, beautiful vocals, love what you did with the accompanying voice.

Thanks for the Lyrics

WOW, this is the coolest thing i've heard in a while and i don't mean that as a dis to anyone on here. This is incredible. stirs the feels in the soul. idk what to say.