The track is great. Mind if i add lyrics and send you my lyrics combined with your track? i have to get your consent...that's why i ask. I suggest adding in a couple piano breaks, but keep the piano melody you still have. Just use the loops you have, and mix them up into short breaks to give the listener small variation throughout the song.
I think you could have picked a better drum pattern than what you used. You need to come up with more than 1 or 2 piano combinations to make the track sound more interesting. Not trying to put you down or anything just a few pointers to help get you to that next level. Until your next track "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
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TheKunig
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Very well produced.
Hats off
~Eighteen
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All The Best
John