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BROHOOF!! Awesome I make music to I'm going to be honest Like AppleJack with you The vocals could use some improvement that doesn't you should give up, you can only get better and better, hears a tip, try to sing every day and look on you tube for vocal tips. as Rainbow Dash would say That's so Awesome! keep up the good work

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I digg this! I make beats but definitely use others' if I feel a freestyle instantly and this just happened to be one of them. Is it cool if I use it? I'll check out your other stuff on the other sites as well. Maybe we can get things going but on this one for sure. Just know I don't really have much uploaded for you to feel out my style.. I guess best bet would be storytelling emcee vibes.. Hah! Well I will have tons uploaded after this coming week!

Tight beat. I like how it's put together in a way I can tell a story from it initially being a story without any lyrics, I feel. Let me know if it's cool or not (opposed to just me assuming it is) I'll feature you as credit, all that.

Keep rocking!(;
-Ramey Rae

I think the song is very good I would not stop your day job keep at it and take your talent to the next level I have been in pro music and am an A&r exec, producer recording engineer recording artist, for a fast take you have a lot going on, nice and full very well done great stuff watch the vox spikes and the lyrics and arrangement is very , very good

Now this is something. Please don't take anything i say to heart I criticize peoples music as a hobby to voice an opinion and try to give advise to my fellow musicians. I am just going to say that i do not care for your singing to much but you do have a little potential have you ever considered voice correction kinda like T-Pain would use? Like I said not an insult just trying to help ya. Now to this trance/techno thing you have going on. I like it. I liked it so much i downloaded it. Please continue making beats like this because i really do enjoy them.

bestfrigincritic;
keep music alive

Ummm........ Speechless. Ya don't quit your day job kid.

Hmmm, well I thought it had to some good synths :) But u may wanna to get a lil more powerful kick,and some fx. Go to google and search vengeance sound. They have AWESOME samples and trust me, u will be AMAZED! But a good track man ;) And maybe can ya check out my tracks too? thanks!

SOunds pretty good to me, my friend :-)

Keep em coming

John

Hey at least you can hold a tone....thats great...lots of ppl cant even hold a note. Keep practicing on your tone. Would love to cover this...resing it...let me know if your interested. :) Great job, this is very moving...

Creative and well executed. Enjoyed listening.

All The Best

John

not bad man its ok good job. is there anyway i cud get that piano sample or in midi with name of keys and cords

Nice track but where are the beats?

Wow, instantly inspired by this beat. You have a good voice. The vox do a need a little work. Check your levels and record 2 good takes and double them up, you'll be surprised how good that'll sound with some effects. Great lyrics. Good job. Check me out fam!

totally agree with abnerbesares....keep at it.....it takes practice....

I give the credit of taking the risk to sing and just whant to say keep going at it and forget what anybody says beacause if you keep at it you could get there. GOOD LUCK OK !

young Jedi indeed... everything bear said was true...
listen to him, what he says comes from deep wisdom.
It is all your choice, at your age, anything is possible.
So believe in yourself and in your dreams, impossible is nothing.
yet remember... true success is NOT about money, fame, power...
true success is a long road... it is realizing the reason your here, knowing your purpose, your gift, what it is u LOVE TO DO and surrounding yourself with peers, teachers and mentors to cultivate that gift... then with practice, perseverance, and patients, life will find a way for u to make a living with your gift... living life loving what doing what you love, is priceless... it is true success... it is mastery...
something to strive for, young jedi...
a change for the better. ;-)

So, me again. you didn't "screamed" the mic away as I told you. so i can't see any development in here. sry.
And listenable was a good word to describe this stuff here. youre just 14 so it's okey, if i think how i played e.g. guitar with 14 years, satan better should have eat my soul. but now it's better and listenable i hope. :P
So if you wanna make me a faviour, just delete this itunes crap in your profile. from the nearly 300k loopermans here are probably 20 at itunes? ;D

so you're young and do a good start. but maybe you just ask someone (the best would be such a singing teacher at a musicschool) for help. and you will see, it will become better. :)

and jus forget biber and co. these are musical sacrifices of commerce... not real, and they do a bullsh*t which they call music.

greetings. glocke.

Your voice isn't that bad. Just need to develop it more, make it more powerful. I like the instrumental as well its basic but compliments your singing and rapping. You remind me of me :O your a similar age, this sounds like something I would make as well. If you want to work with me I'd be glad to, I (kinda) make beats so check my profile, listen, if you like email me. I think we'd get along!

yo.

bear told you everything important. ;)
the backings in your songs are really good, they're a really good base to develop your style.
what you've really to develop is your voice. don't be shy, "scream" into the mic, show your voice, don't hesistate, nobody we punish you for a nice tone, for a strong voice. thats the most important thing while singing, i think. ;)

i liked the song bc u created it yourself fam but im blowed 2
so dont do drugs lol
nice track

OK, young Jedi, after 83 listens, I think it's about time someone gave you a review. First off, you have skills. You just need some development and seasoning :)

I would suggest you sign up for every choir class available in school. I mean every last class you can find. What that will do is help you with pitch, breathing, phrasing, reading music, etc. I would also suggest you listen to some of the great hip hop artists on Looperman and study their phrasing, tempo, dynamics, flow. If you have questions, contact them and ask away. They will be happy to help you out.

Just keep doing what you are doing. Most people your age are sitting around playing video games and have no clue. You are developing a skill that will follow you through your entire life.

Well done. Hopefully the next review will come before the 186th listen :)

Bear

Hey, this is a big improvement. This song is actually listenable! I like it. It all flows and matches a lot better. One thing I suggest is add a bit more sounds to the song. It feels like the entire song is one big intro. This is the best song you have done so far.

~Nap

Yeah, now I'm seeing some improvement. No offense, but when I heard your first two songs I thought you was a girl. Like you really sounded like a girl. But when I looked at your profile I was like LOL! But now you don't sound like one :D Oh, ever tried considering to slightly edit your voice settings on whatever program your using? like slightly autotuning it or something? Or at least compress your voice to make it match the song because it sounds like a song that was meant to have no voice and then you find it and just add your voice to it... like some sort of karaoke toy. K peace.

not bad, that wasn't as "entertaining" as your first one. (which is a very good thing) hahahhahaaha. keep them coming.

Hey, not bad! Now this is far more better then my first songs I made! But yeah the volume does need to match towards the end. But I like the effort on trying to not stick to one particular genre. I do that too.

Yes this song was definitely better than "No more Chances"