BraskoSama

sounds great

coool trackx

Very upbeat melody. nice chord structure with that 7th put in there on the 7th bar.. What I would love to hear are some more intricate percussions and some build-up. Right now its a pretty straightforward house tune that has a lot of potentials to build on. So keep on this one mate, it's good, just needs some more variety.

can i use part of this track as a background on a dental video you can count with credits?

If you have a reference track, compare the spectral plot of both of them and see if they kind of match. You can do that with a free waveform editor such as Audacity.

Hey, good vibes first of all! I think that, during the drop, starting from 2:56, there is a bit too much bass on the sides. It can be a stylistic choice, sure, but it causes more problems than benefits most of the time. I suggest leaving the part over 150hz on the sides, and keeping the frequencies below in the center. It can also benefit you since I don't think there is much groove with the kick and sub bass in the center, and this could help. This central groove should in my opinion be way richer of 60-100hz frequencies from the kick and sub bass, compared to the bass on the sides.
Passing to the highs now, I think it's not bad at all but it could benefit from an exciter (just a little bit of drive and you should be fine).

might turn the drums down a bit in beginning or a different loop
melodic buildup in intro is really good but dropoff feels bad @ 1:02, some adjustment is needed it's hard to say without being able to fiddle with it. I would just take out the riser. 1:33 onward is good vocals could be cleaned up a little

Second section is strong w/ piano, drums come in nice but not a fan of the last 2 bars of them they take out all the buildup, would just keep first pattern through or maybe drop kicks then

last chorus is fine. taken by surprise by the outro but I like it, might cut halfway though with a clave to end it as it runs a little long. If not I like how the drums end minus the kick echo would really like to hear it end on a strong note

overall good track, mixing is good, good ideas and it feels unique from the original song, think it just needs tightened up in a few spots (transitions mostly) and it would be ready to go.

Potente pista de house amigo mío, tiene fuerza y ese bajo es rompedor. Los arpegios son fantásticos igual que el piano y el resto de instrumentos. Un tema con mucha calidad y excelente producción y mezcla. Buen día compañero. Paz y salud.

This is a cool track.
I specialy like the part from 1:00
Nice job!!

def a good foundation... will work on something and send your way.

This is cool bro

i like this shit

Brasko, you really have a talent and ear for that chill-out downtempo sound! I love the vocal samples and that piano riff definitely gets you moving in your chair! I think you've got a really unique sounds here. My advice, for what it's worth would be to take a step back and don't listen to it for a while. I find when I do that with my tunes and come back to it I remember what I liked about it in the first place. I think if you do that here, you'll see all the things that are so great about this and maybe some spots you can improve on! anyway, hope that helps and keep up the stellar work, you've got a talent and ear for this!
-B

Absolutely love it! This reminds me of one of my favorite artist, UNKLE. That driving bass line is excellent. My only critique would be the sudden cut-off at the end. Maybe a fade out or a single instrument to close it out and tie it all up. Incredible work otherwise! Well done!
-B

This has an early days of electronic music feel to it. I love the lead pad that starts @ 057. Gives the track a hint of darkness. Great beat man.

thank

It reminds me of a trip at night

I agree with the opinion above. good luck with creativity

i did find myself transported and enjoyed the trip! brilliant production!

good job my brother, you need a voice! look like me on looperman, maybe in your style you will have more luck than me!
Michel

wow i really liked that guitar right outta the gate and this kept going! that crazy strangled feedbacky synth is killer.

This is an elegant arrangement. Just enough going on to kick it off. There is a little bit of master bus distortion in some parts, but it's cool. Who is the singer BTW?