WyteBoy21

Lyrically way better some of the crap dudes peddle on CDs outside of Walmart.
I'm a chopper fan so I'm a bit bias when it comes to flow.
There are some issues with it tho: 1. as a Hip Hop song you took too long to appear, 32 seconds before a word is spoken. Sorry dude, that rule can't be changed. 8-10 seconds should be the max; 2. the music is nice & melodic but it doesn't fit the title and theme. You're declaring conquest over the rap game issuing a battle cry of "(I'ma)Change the Game", yet your musical composition, as Korrupt pointed out, does not convey that. The mantra behind such a statement as "changing the game" in HH is equally musical composition AND lyrical presentation. 4. There wasn't a musical nor lyrical bridge, which is a staple in music that packs a 12 gauge blow to the listeners of their genres. Imagine a newbie group declaring to be superior to Metallica or U2 and don't implement a solo guitar in their I-declare-war song. WTF! Who are these bustas!
Good effort, tho. Consider a new & harder beat behind the song.

Great track smooth flowing and lyrical ready for air-play!
You present a good package of technical production and confidence as a lyricist. Must be the Chicago influence.

U can spit bro.

_C-DUB_

Nice track man you flow is on point... Nice beat Keep up the Good Work good things will come.

Whyteboy21 I like your confidence. Your lyrics are nice. You need to come harder on your tracks though. The production of your music is lacking head nockability. I am the devil and I am not quite ready for your soul yet. Nobody wants to steal your stuff and even if they did there is not much you can do about it since you do not have copyrights to you music. copy written?

NICE TRACK WYTE BOY ...YOU GOT GAME ...BUT YOUR PRODUCING NEEDS MORE SOUND ...FOR YOUR TYPE OF VOICE ....IF I WAS TO PRODUCE SOME ONE WITH YOUR TYPE OF TONE .....ID REMIX THE CHORUS ,,BUT OVERALL THROUGHT OUT THE MY 22 YEARS IN THE MUSIC INDUSTRY I KNOW YOU WILL BLOW UP YOUR GAME ....PEACE AND GOOD LUCK ....I LIKE YOUR STYLE ...I DONT THINK ANYONE HERE WOULD STEAL YOUR MUSIC DUDE .....EXPECT THAT FROM SOMEONE THAT KNOWS YOU PERSONALLY ...THOSE ARE FIRST TO DO THAT ........

no problems with it, just think you could have made more of an impact if you put that over a hard hittin anthem kinda beat and gave it some aggression. nice tho....oh and i second the auto tune comment

let em know homie... keep doin ya thang!

like the confidence. Thats the attitude they look for. peace fam great lyrics, good word play u doing ya thang thang.

Good track, everything flows nicely, really nice quality, not to be that guy but your track is copyrighted not copy written, sorry that is the teacher in me talking. Anyway good job and keep it up, this is good stuff.

i wasnt expectin your flow to be so smooth you killed it the beat is dope 2

good job man you killed this one

wyte boy u are the doppeest white boy i ever heard on this type of beat and flow, very professional, but i think u spent a lot of money on your production that is way on a different from a lot of songs ive heard, a lot of mcs better watch out because u can take them out as long as u stay with the time,drugs,money, swagger and the struggle u will not be stopped...... on that note
i give u a ten on a scale 1-10