This is great. I have a few problems with this though, first; The snare. If I were you, I would either layer that with another snare or just swap it out for a new one. I have that same snare, and its no good by itself.
Second, the kicks NEED to be louder. Only by 1.5 db though. But then you should sidechain the kick to the master track using fruity limiter. There are videos I can give you to help with that.
Third. YOU NEED PERCUSSION(all of these are drum related issues).
Put something on 3 and 7 beats. Could be a snare, click, clap or snap, or even a tom, just put something.
I only give you this much critique because I believe you can do better than this. Keep going! Don't give up!
Also, you prob should remake it like Verdi said, and then in the process follow my tips. You do you, though.
I love this track don't change anything keep the hip hop element in it blends great with the res of the track on that note. I would use it on a project for a rap artist.. I wil gladly give you Co Producer rights and split my 50% and give you 25% let me know if you are interested.
Pretty good track, for me personally the one thing I'd look for more in this track would be some variance, just switching some parts up and adding some different tunes/elements to it but again the foundation of the track itself is really good.
too slow for me, but thats me! im sure i could come up with something but this is best meant for someone else more story telling type inspirational..
not knocking it at all, fire work, dope productions
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Second, the kicks NEED to be louder. Only by 1.5 db though. But then you should sidechain the kick to the master track using fruity limiter. There are videos I can give you to help with that.
Third. YOU NEED PERCUSSION(all of these are drum related issues).
Put something on 3 and 7 beats. Could be a snare, click, clap or snap, or even a tom, just put something.
I only give you this much critique because I believe you can do better than this. Keep going! Don't give up!
Also, you prob should remake it like Verdi said, and then in the process follow my tips. You do you, though.
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Yeah I left some space for a vocalist.
I tried something with one acapella from Cole The VII:
https://soundcloud.com/pipelz/cole-the-vii-for-us-prod-pipello
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lets get more!! much love
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