Wowzers!! this is freaking awesome!! if honestly I have never been a huge fan of electronic music, though I have sung over electronic tracks before but this is fast changing my mind. A very interesting and intricate track, that is holding my attention and no doubt will stick inside my head haha, can't help but like it. It's DYNAMITE!!!
really cool I agree with sheen, I started digging it more around 3:12
definitely needs some more mixing on the highs, I feel the track is to loud on the highs and im not getting enough dirty and crunchy lows from the synths or maybe the bass... a side chain would also help out... any other feedback feel free to DM me.
huge fan of daftpunk btw im glad someone is doing a similar style.
I'm gonna give it some time before revisiting tracks, right now I kinda want to make as much new stuff as possible. I'll take that advice on board for my next tracks though!
Very interesting track my friend, you went for a french house-disco vibe but went modern with it instead and I appreciate that. I worked on a French Disco-House type track not too long ago, so it's a treat to see this and listen to it. I think you did a great job.
This is a really cool track. Lots of interesting sounds and atmosphere. I also love the progression of this track. 3:12 onwards has to be my favorite part. That bass synth is something else and I love when it opens up from there into space.
Mixing wise it feels lacking in energy. Maybe some tighter sidechain on the kick and snare could help. Some brightness on the lead synths could help open it up too, so maybe some white noise and some upper harmonics?
A solid saw bass layered underneath that high plucky bass could help a lot to add some body to the low end around parts like 1:31.
Of course this all depends on what you're going for for the overall sound.
See "Daft Punk - Doin it right (k?d remix)" for my preference, though I don't think this track needs to be as extreme as it feels more like a vibe than a banger.
Well, these guys already said what I would have said. :-)
I think this would be GREAT uploaded as an instrumental as well.
It has so much life! Great job. :-)
Thanks for the feedback Neuromancer56! I see what you mean about the vocals. Sometimes when I work on a track I get used to listening to it and can't tell if something is too far back! Any tips for bringing out vocals?
Thanks for the feedback Patricia! Do you think they are in different keys, how could you tell? I'll be honest, I didn't really think about that. I did pitch your original vocals up 3 semitones.
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definitely needs some more mixing on the highs, I feel the track is to loud on the highs and im not getting enough dirty and crunchy lows from the synths or maybe the bass... a side chain would also help out... any other feedback feel free to DM me.
huge fan of daftpunk btw im glad someone is doing a similar style.
I'm gonna give it some time before revisiting tracks, right now I kinda want to make as much new stuff as possible. I'll take that advice on board for my next tracks though!
4-12-18 is very cool btw
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I listened to your track 'music breaks us free', really cool stuff, the baseline especially.
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Mixing wise it feels lacking in energy. Maybe some tighter sidechain on the kick and snare could help. Some brightness on the lead synths could help open it up too, so maybe some white noise and some upper harmonics?
A solid saw bass layered underneath that high plucky bass could help a lot to add some body to the low end around parts like 1:31.
Of course this all depends on what you're going for for the overall sound.
See "Daft Punk - Doin it right (k?d remix)" for my preference, though I don't think this track needs to be as extreme as it feels more like a vibe than a banger.
Awesome work, keep it up!
-{Sheen}
I like what you said about brightness. I was just boosting higher frequencies, didn't think to saturate or distort them.
Also that k?d remix is fire, cheers for bringing that to my attention!
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I think this would be GREAT uploaded as an instrumental as well.
It has so much life! Great job. :-)
Vocals with be forward in the future, sometimes I listen to a track so much I get used to it and don't here the levels!
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