Very, very nice track. The soft "jazzy" drums are fantastic with the spacey atmospheric pads. And the sparkling, echoing keys are a perfect compliment to your warm, mellow vocals. And the lyrics are excellent as well. I wouldn't change a thing, girl ~ it's perfect as it stands.
Thank You so much dear.. Guess Sumper will be happy to know, You like his choise of drums and so on.. And so happy to know, You like the lyrics and voice.. Means a lot to me, people notice the work with lyrics and voice nicely and like them/it..
Alright Stina, lets listen and review simultaneously... Keep the intro definitely. percussion is solid and well mixed. Love this feeling, your vox add so much to this. Love the vocal play with you and the pads. Good choice of bass and instruments all around. Solid :)
Thank You so much dear for the very nice compliments.. ☺ Kind of You.. Sumper has now made a profile in here, so hope he also will read Your very nice words concerning the bass and instruments..
hey Stina, I like this soundscape and your voice fits right in. I really like the low pitched, semi spoken parts, creates a very special mood. Good stuff.
Ha det gott
/pmk
I've not worked with Spyder, but I bet it's a great experience. The man knows what he's doind and he is quite a talented musician. It is not surprising, therefore, that you two have created this great track. The backing track and your vocals are fantastic. The production is great. This baby sounds professional. Feel free to email me a copy if you can.
A very atmospheric piece. Quite dark, especially given the content of the lyrics. I like the intro, I think it is just fine. I can't imagine what you would change. Faved.
You have a great voice, perhaps, we can do a track together in the future. I'm already currently involved in 3 collabs at the time.
Thank You so much for Your very kind and nice review dear.. and the nice compliment concerning my voice.. ☺ I am flattered.. And would be nice to collaborate yes.. I'm also working with several nice collaborations, so that's the same.. ☺
I still like it, but personally, I would leave the higher pitched voice on the intro out from 5 seconds to 12 seconds. That's just my opinion though. I do like the spoken word that you have after the intro, I think its great. You have such good vocals. Very nice job. Would you care to either post or e-mail your lyrics. I am having a little trouble understanding them. Not your fault, my ears sometimes can't pick vocals/lyrics out of songs. I just think it's a great track and once I read the vocals I'll beable to hear them. You've got a really really nice track here and I like it alot. Very nice job on everything. Take Care, Gord
Your lyrics and vocals are perfect. They are not messy at all. It all fits together nicely. You have a well thought out and well produced track that I enjoyed listening to.
Take Care, Gord
Great mellow atmospheric rock, Stina. You have one of the smoothest voices I've ever heard (though I still want to hear you scream and growl...LOL). Please finish this soon ~ I want to hear the whole song. And my kudos to Sumper for the music.
Well dear.. I 'talked' with him yesterday.. and leaded him to this site to the very kind reviews.. Then he wanted to put more to the song and fullfil some.. I liked the first version, as I sang to, so I have to You know.. THINK what to do and compare the versions first.. I think I use the first again and then just use few things from the new.. Don't exactly know yet... But will work with it soon again.. s Thank You so much for Your very kind and nice compliments and revied dear.. Like You..
Josephine has the great honour of this track, as I just tried to make higher in sound, edit and sing to together with her.. She owns the credits and I can warmly recommend You to listen to her beautiful music and voice.. Just search for 'Josephine' in the search browser..
But thank You so very much dear for the very kind and nice comment and review..
Hi - great work - sounds good - cold chills run through the body, representing somewhere while away from home where there are not people but you're walking in nature and woods and enjoy the beautiful oblivion of the world. 100% Add to Favs
Well dear.. That's a very nice idea of the story I like, which I will think about.. It was supposed to tell a story of a poor hooker, who is standing in the street trying to make her 'gold' ... If You and other reviewers think it's too close to some people to be in a song..., please let me know thanks ...
I'm very happy You choosed it as a favourite dear thanks.. ☺ So I've just been writing to Sumper to tell about Your nice reviews.. He's a big part of the song too, You know..
Thank You very much dear.. Sumper made the hole melody by playing guitar and worked with vst's in Fl Studio I believe.. So guess not THAT kind of loops in it like we use to use a lot in here.. Only my vocals are a kind of loops .. I will soon fullfil the version and let You know when, when You have been that kind and choose it as a favourite.. The sun has been shining all day on the window and warmed very much, so will work with it this evening..
I really like this track. I think your vocals are super. Nice beat to this track, Did something happen to your upload that it ends at 1:25? Hope there's more because this track has a great feel to it. Take it easy.
Gord
LOL No .. Nothing happened to the track.. I downloaded it this evening by Sumper01 and made the lyrics and sang to it this evening.. Before continuing tomorrow (today it is now here in DK) I just wanted Your opinions, before I used time and so on til fulfill and You know what? You made me so happy with Your so kind words to my vocals.. Thank You so much for that.. Now I will find my pillow and get some hours sleep .. Have a nice night ..
Thank You so much for Your nice review.. I needed it.. Then I get happy and encouraged to fulfill the version thanks.. Cause it means something, what You guys like..
Hi there :) Well most of ur Ideas r very cool. But u must work on your voicetechnic. u have a really nice voice..dont missunderstand me....ur music is cool..respekt for u and much luck :) 7th
It is because, Josephine made the song dear.. as Wonders something... And I thought it was such a nice and lovely song.. But kind of monorized and not so loud... So I tried to do something about the sounds and so on, but wasn't satisfied... Then I just wanted to show her, what I did to the sounds.. and the singing for fun..
Thank You so much dear.. How sweet You are.. Makes me happy..☺ Have startet 10 songs or I think more now... *giggle* So have to fullfill them.. instead of starting new ones... Hmmmm...
I agree with you other review, the vocals could be a little higher, but I really like your voice with the music they compliment each other very nicely.
Suggestive song. Tremendous music, well run into the apotheosis. Suggestive and well combined voices make this song extremely good proposal. Great job.
Righteous bass... Vocals are chilly yet cool...Kinda wish I hurd the beginning strums of the elec guitars... they sound clipped in mid strum already... Nice Smashing Pumpkins vibe...
I like this, spaced out and yet incredible presence. The bass is suggestive and when the guitars break in, I felt you took it all the way home.
Cheers
/pmk
Personally I would like to hear you vocals a little more forward in the mix because it felt like they were getting lost in the guitars. Other than that I liked your singing and what you have started with this song.
... LOL.. You're right dear.. Well.. Somehow I had a nice feeling about this this time, cause my voice often is higher in sound than the loops.. But in fact I did turn up the volume on voice.. But maybe I have to make it higher..
Your voices blend well together. Loved how the track pics up at at about 58 secs into the song. Good voices, good lyrics, good beat I enjoyed it a lot. Gr8 work..........Peace.
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Very, very nice track. The soft "jazzy" drums are fantastic with the spacey atmospheric pads. And the sparkling, echoing keys are a perfect compliment to your warm, mellow vocals. And the lyrics are excellent as well. I wouldn't change a thing, girl ~ it's perfect as it stands.
Peace and love,
Mike
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Ha det gott
/pmk
Tack det samma til ha det så bra.. s
Hugs Stina..
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Faved
All The Best
John
Hugs Stina..
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You have a great voice, perhaps, we can do a track together in the future. I'm already currently involved in 3 collabs at the time.
All The Best
John
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Your lyrics and vocals are perfect. They are not messy at all. It all fits together nicely. You have a well thought out and well produced track that I enjoyed listening to.
Take Care, Gord
Is it okay with the lyrics now written to the song?, or is it too messy... Tried to make lines (enter...), but stands like that now ...
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Thanks for Your nice review..
Hugs Stina..
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Peace,
Spyder
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Great Job.
Keep doing your thing.
Greez DJ-DOUBLE
But thank You so very much dear for the very kind and nice comment and review..
Hugs Stina..
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I'm very happy You choosed it as a favourite dear thanks.. ☺ So I've just been writing to Sumper to tell about Your nice reviews.. He's a big part of the song too, You know..
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Thanks for Your nice review and compliments.. ☺
Hugs Stina..
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Gord
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All The Best
John
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Thanks for the review dear..
Hugs Stina..
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Cheers
/pmk
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cheers
ioka flow
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Thank You for Your nice comment dear.. ☺
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