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Absolutely phenomenal

Interesting choices with the guitar eq, but the overall vibe is nice.

Thank you!

very cool ... the mood is sad but the track is progressive ... it's not pop ( I can imagine millions reaching for the blade... :-)
psychedelic maybe? but of course, it's not the point ...
great track, fistbump, Dankr

That's awesome. You can make music with limited means but at some point it holds you back and then investing in better stuff is just such a joy :)

That's really interesting! Piano played live?

Yeah I'm the same, although I now have a three or four stage process:
- I write the track in a couple days and make a draft which I post on Looperman
- I spend a couple more days fixed stuff
- then after max 1 week (usually as soon as I have a new idea) I desert the track.
Or actually I don't desert it, I make a video and schedule it to go live a couple weeks/months later on YouTube.
- now a couple days before it goes live on YouTube, I take a fresh look at it and fix stuff I hadn't heard before
- then last November I took some recent tracks, again did some fixes and published them as an EP; I plan to do something similar this summer but with an album of say 10-12 tracks.

So there's several cycles of "ok I'm done" and "let's have another look" keeping it fresh. See if that's something that might work for you (some similar cycle adjusted to your way of working)?

Yeah I get that, but it has loads of energy, exactly because it isn't all perfectly in time, so make sure you don't lose that energy!

I like it. Strong rap, and the out of tune piano gives it a great weird sound that works well. Good job!

This si so cool! hope its okay i use it for a skit in my church?

hey man i really like this a lot. nice tonal variety and great production. the song is catchy as hell. i can hear Shaman77 singing a poem with this — if yer looking for collab, you oughtta hit him up.

Awesome track. One thing though, I'm listening on crappy inner ear phones, but it sounds to me like it could be clipping/distorting in the louder parts. Maybe you want to check that, but otherwise really enjoyed this!!

very strange, inventive, percussive. i’m curious about this rat!

nice dude !good job !
Michael

This is a great track, my friend.
Really well-done mate.
Maj

Nice, I really like where this head-boppin' track is going. I think the pads need to be pushed back a little bit... Let the other elements shine more. Cheers!

yo i love that snare can i have it

Fr good jobb