hello,
Good composition, but just a little thing. Sometime, your voice seems to fall down as if you can not maintain it at its note. It makes a special effect, but, I think that if you make longer expirations (like trainings), you could develope a real beautiful voice, but a voice with a strength, which can give a real presence to you music(s).
It's only my opinion, don(t worry, you have this possibility to better control your voice, so...DO IT !
i agree with you wholeheartedly - i am sure i could do loads more with my voice, just... finding the time. not to try and cover my tracks here... but i was sitting when i did the vocal on this (bad move) - and also, like i mentioned, it was all ad-lib (the lyrics) - so this is a one-take track (on the vocals)
but thanks for the advise. i hear what you're saying! thanks!
A very emotional track, I really liked the piano melody and the sighs/vocal ambience. This song really shows off your vocal talent, I really like your voice!
Absolutely amazing. It takes you to place of beauty and contemplation. I just love it..its phenomenal. Are all the vocals yours? Like the ones floating in the background? unbelievable..reminds me of Lisa Gerrard meets Evanescence. I would put this in different genre than Cinematic cause its so much more than just Cinematic. I would normally skip songs that are that genre.
This is pro stuff.
good ... !!!!
keep doing these type of peaceful tracks ...:)
i liked the way u started the song !!!!
good mix but could be more better !!!! :)
the piano running behing is clshing with ur vocals .... make it soft and i liked the chant behind the track !!!!!
u can even make the track more soft with a good mix !!! (peace)\m/
overall a nice track !!!!
u have a such a gifted voice take care of it !!!!
bye ..
All the best !!!!
God bless ..:):)
This song makes me wish I had hips like a woman, because that's where the rhythm immediately moves to and entices.
I'm actually left quite speechless, even after two listens. So intelligent without alienating or leaving anyone behind. There's absolutely nothing I can offer constructive criticism for. I can offer up a fave however.
I'm greatly impressed by your creativity and skills, Minette.
Some of the vocal phrases within this piece are just magic...beautifully poised with real presence...possibly because of the cinematic connotations I can see a mid point where the singing fades and the music swells for a bar or two..however this is in no way a criticism,I was getting swept along with the music and adapting it to an imaginary film....extraordinary! cheers planet :)
hey planet... let me kick off by saying - without your loops, some of my tunes would have never seen the light of day. i LOVE your stuff... and now a comment from you. :) made my day. so glad you enjoyed the track, and thanks for the idea of putting a break in the middle. maybe i'll do an extended "extra-cinematic" version of the tune. Hmmmm... i can hear it in my head already
I'm getting some celtic feelings with this one, your voice sounds celtic... I don't know. Anyway, you have an awesome voice!
I can hear this one in some epic movie, like LOTR or something like that. Great arrangements and production and nice choice of loops! Really liked it and again, damn great voice!
Oops - ALXSIX - your reply is just below by johnnygadget!
@johnnygadget... i've heard murmers about you on looperman before! thanks for the listen and comment... the bird in flight analogy is stunning. i always really enjoy reading about what people 'see / feel / experience' when listening to my tunes. thanks for sharing your thoughts also!
absolutely wonderful voice nice mix everything is where it should be ! impressive result this song made me feel like i was living through a birds eyes while in flight, soaring effortlessly riding high on thermal updrafts over some European mountains looking down with not a single care ! thanks for that!
i love all things celtic... i love LOTR. And I love that you mentioned those things as coming to mind when you listen to this track. thanks so much for commenting and appreciate the compliments.
After I review your track Tempation,I wanted to hear something else from you!
Your voice is amazing(I slipped,lol),beautiful song!
I will put the fav, in this one!
9R - i wish I could take full credit for the beats, but I can't. some of it is the fabulour planetjazzbass, and sadly, can't remember who the other beat's from. but i did mess around with it to fit the overall sound... thanks for the compliments though. appreciate it. :)
on Blame (Too Late For Me) by minette
Good composition, but just a little thing. Sometime, your voice seems to fall down as if you can not maintain it at its note. It makes a special effect, but, I think that if you make longer expirations (like trainings), you could develope a real beautiful voice, but a voice with a strength, which can give a real presence to you music(s).
It's only my opinion, don(t worry, you have this possibility to better control your voice, so...DO IT !
but thanks for the advise. i hear what you're saying! thanks!
on Blame (Too Late For Me) by minette
fav and dl.
/pmk
p.s. I'd love to do a song with you. Let me know if you're interrested.
your kind words are much appreciated :)
on Blame (Too Late For Me) by minette
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on Temptation by minette
Some nice vocals.
on In My Hands (Sharper Claws) by minette
It's going on my faviroutes.
Ste :)
thanks for the listen :)
on Ever & Always (You Make Me Smile) by minette
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on the stillness of you by minette
on Temptation by minette
on September Song (Apple Blossoms) by minette
nice song
on Temptation by minette
This is pro stuff.
Aelfo
on Red Sun | Weapons Down by minette
on Red Sun | Weapons Down by minette
keep doing these type of peaceful tracks ...:)
i liked the way u started the song !!!!
good mix but could be more better !!!! :)
the piano running behing is clshing with ur vocals .... make it soft and i liked the chant behind the track !!!!!
u can even make the track more soft with a good mix !!! (peace)\m/
overall a nice track !!!!
u have a such a gifted voice take care of it !!!!
bye ..
All the best !!!!
God bless ..:):)
on In My Hands (Sharper Claws) by minette
I'm actually left quite speechless, even after two listens. So intelligent without alienating or leaving anyone behind. There's absolutely nothing I can offer constructive criticism for. I can offer up a fave however.
I'm greatly impressed by your creativity and skills, Minette.
It's awesome when someone hears the song the way I intended - lyrics are such a big aspect of the creative process to me.
on Temptation by minette
on Temptation by minette
Nice track !
Bm;)
on Temptation by minette
I can hear this one in some epic movie, like LOTR or something like that. Great arrangements and production and nice choice of loops! Really liked it and again, damn great voice!
@johnnygadget... i've heard murmers about you on looperman before! thanks for the listen and comment... the bird in flight analogy is stunning. i always really enjoy reading about what people 'see / feel / experience' when listening to my tunes. thanks for sharing your thoughts also!
on Temptation by minette
Johnny Gadget
Gadgetland Music Factory
on Wait For Me by minette
Your voice is amazing(I slipped,lol),beautiful song!
I will put the fav, in this one!
great job!
9R
on Fire by minette
on Fire by minette
everything is so beautiful and elegant ...
flawless vocals ...
this one is very close to perfection!!
awesome ...
peace, rei
on Temptation by minette
Really beautiful voice, and excellent go along with this beat!
Also very well made, and arranged beat!
Excellent work!
9R
on Fire by minette