Spudsy

nice track,

Production:

nice chilled out layout, transfers are ok, however i really think that from the break into the main you really need to cut out the orchestral aspects and bring in some really uplifting melody, maybe interpret the orch's in the rise and throw in a big kick and snare build with a riser, just to add a little tension to the track. so ye reasonable layout with nice chords, just like i said a big melody would kill this track.

Dynamics:

i think you need to look at your hi hats, rather than boosting the high end which i think you have done, try a little technique i picked up, in terms of EQ, i try to stick the rule "always reduce never boost," obviously sometimes it needs a slight couple of DB to stand out, however if it is over used frequencies will fight in that range and you'll receive a phase effect, i tend to use a high cut EVERYTHING at 13KHz, also i take away as many frequencies as i can that aren't required, such as some low end on hi hats, just because you can't hear them doesn't mean they aren't there,

also i think your kick needs a little more punch, try layering it with a similar kick, and discreetly throw in a a very shortly enveloped hi hat, this will help it to cut through the mix,

your bass is slightly overpowering on the G key, try using a low cut at around 40Hz, also Nexus initiate patch is ok i guess however i think you should consider layering that bass up with other presets from the ROMpler or if your any good at synthesis then make your own square synth and layer you "Saw initiate" with that, saw's and square are more filthy than an old guy on viagra when they get together.

any ways, i hope this helps you, let me know if you get it sorted out, or if you want help on a melody give me a shout, i write melodies in seconds usually, keep up the good work, and hope to hear from you again soon :D

This is really very good another one of the tracks on this site that actually could be released,keep up the excellent work bro!

Very cool, very cool. I know this might sound weird but it kinda makes me feel like I'm on a hot sunny beach drinking ice cold pina coladas!

You're killing me man. You just killing me. I listen to my remixes and think. Yea, I'm doing pretty good. Then I hear this clear and clever mix. You're musical as well as technically adept. My mixes sound so dark....I want that brightness of production you have. In other words I love where you went and are going with this track. Fav

nice. great work man. very professional. keep it going. im also working on a track for lost and found

Hi nice tune bud its got a great vibe to it this track and you have arranged the track to suit the vocal really well.
Well Done

Regards
Krook

THis is terrific man! Great sound...Great arrangement around the vox, and you really captured the feel of the vox with the melodies you have created. I'm favin this one! Real summer feeling to it!

Spudsy your tunes are vivid rainbows, from the overall feeling of them to the nuances and attention to detail. Interesting to listen to, and a pleasure to hear. Great work.

This stands out when compared to other songs using this pella. I really like the bass line that you've created. It compliments the beats and the vocals at the same time. Really cool mix! Nice one!

Hey, it's Derek again.... How can I download this? I see it's been downloaded once, but I cant find where I can download it.

Hey man! Love what you did with my acapella!!!!! Really great job! It's in my top favorites of the remixes of my vocals. Let me know if you want to do another one! :) Derek Vickers

hi mate great work youve done really well to fit the vocal round the track, or was it vice versa?? lol. any way good work mate, its like one of those choons you'd hear on holiday that would stick in your head!!