You have to put an Automation in the beginning cause your intro sounds too loud and you have to put some basic Melody not only vocals cause its sound plain but i think those voice clip is nice but dont overuse it, Keep it up.
it's not so bad for a first track but for me, you need to bring more relief and finesse because actually it's a little rough.
nothing negative in my comment just an impression after listening
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nothing negative in my comment just an impression after listening
keep on going!
Bleep
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on sajmON - Im Optimus Prime by gamerp2