I really like the Intro vocals, but I think you need to lower your crash a little bit and have some sidechain in your drop to make it more clear also have some other elements in the drop for example, Arp, Skank or any ambience so that it doesn't feel empty that's all, I have fun listening here good job.
Try to practice your modulation skills. I know that's hard. Also, make sure you have constant sound. Don't leave gaps in your song unless you are preparing for a big swirl of modulation. That's my advice lol but you are getting there! :D
You have to put an Automation in the beginning cause your intro sounds too loud and you have to put some basic Melody not only vocals cause its sound plain but i think those voice clip is nice but dont overuse it, Keep it up.
it's not so bad for a first track but for me, you need to bring more relief and finesse because actually it's a little rough.
nothing negative in my comment just an impression after listening
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great sounds love the intro
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nothing negative in my comment just an impression after listening
keep on going!
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