Your songs are always well put together. Great job on this one! i love the melody.
And I am very far from being a pro but everything that Joe commented would definitely help as I am gonna take some of that advice as well. But overall, an excellent track.
This is such a cool! and well put together track.
You have such a great! all round mix/sound here and it's
coming across the pond beautifully. I have listened to
some of your work before and i have to say you are
Exceptionally masterful and *shine* on Dubstep.
This track is AMAZINGGGG!! Keep up the awesome work.
A Fave here 4 me :)
The melodic section from 1:20-2:10 sounds great and the switch at 2:14 is very cool. The track has a nice full sound and with ValveDriver's advice it'll sound even better. I don't usually care much for riddim but this track is very enjoyable. Great work.
I have FL mobile, but rarely use it for anything more than a "sketchbook" to take down ideas. So I don't know how detailed the mixer is, or how in depth you can really go with the whole thing.
That being said, here is my suggestion to help with the mix.
Dynamics and automated motion. Right now, even though there is stereo separation, everything is still sitting in the middle. Try panning different elements of the drop to different spots on the left to right scale. With everything being in the middle it's all fighting for the same spaces and the frequencies are essentially tripping over each other and crowding up the joint.
Not only will that free up spaces for everything to come through more clearly, but it will give a much fuller, and dynamic sound. Making it bigger and and more grandiose.
As far as levels go, the volumes are all good. At least through my headphones. Everything seems to be sitting in the mix just right. Nothing really jumps out, or ducks behind. The sidechaining is a little heavy for my own personal taste, but that's just me. I've never really been a fan of that. So, take that bit of criticism for what it's worth.
The percussion is pretty good. The hats and cymbals are a little low in there. Maybe boost the volume on those. Again, if you can, maybe put a stereo separator on the claps. Widen them out. Bump the hi-hats off center just a bit.
I'm assuming that this is all original, and not a mix of loops...even though it is Looperman, home of the loops. So, again, take my opinions and criticisms for what they're worth. If they help, great. If they don't, then no harm, no foul.
Overall, excellent work. I'm looking forward to hearing what you come up with in the future.
That's what I'm struggling for in my mix, it's all good in my headphones but when I play it on my speaker it sounded off and empty, thanks for this, and about the sidechain I check it out and it's really a bit heavy would definitely working with that, and from the loops, I just used two bass shots and process it a bit, thanks again and have a nice day.
Really great structure, though I wonder why the drop kinda got muffled. Probably the sub is overpowering the other elements thus being muddy. Maybe try cutting somewhere in the 20 - 150hz range by about 2-4 db? Oh, if you also want a more powerful (you probably know this) try reducing the master db/volume of everything BUT the drop by ear, and then the drop should be at the normal volume (for example, I'm using FL Studio, I'd automate the master volume know at 60%-65% on the verses and buildup, and the a jump to the normal 70% volume on the drop) just to give it that good impact when the drop drops.
Anyways, can't believe you just tried riddim, even though it looks like you've already done a lot!
This what I've been waiting for, to pinpoint where to cut because I'm struggling in equalizing stuff, thanks for the effort and tips appreciate this a ton.
My comfort zone right now is 'Melodic Dubstep' so I think switching it up to melodic dubstep on the second drop would be good and it turns out fine, btw thanks for taking the time to listen.
This arp @0:25 reminded of a slot machine so I decided to put more 'slot machine' base sounds, like the fills at the drop @0:44 @0:51 @0:54 and so on, anyway thanks, appreciate this a ton.
It's off to a great start. I would level the tracks. All of the places where the MP3 is chopped on the top and bottom is clipping (too loud/tall). You can solve that with individual track volume adjustment/eq/comp.
Thanks a ton! would definitely check that out, I realize that this track is lacking on basses like Modnex said, this track is full of saws that is unnecessary.
I like the future-bass sound. The little drum fills sound great. One thing I noticed is that during the drops there aren't a lot of mid tones and it sounds a little thin. Great track.
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And I am very far from being a pro but everything that Joe commented would definitely help as I am gonna take some of that advice as well. But overall, an excellent track.
btw you're also a FL Studio Mobile user, I thought I'm just the only one here lol.
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You have such a great! all round mix/sound here and it's
coming across the pond beautifully. I have listened to
some of your work before and i have to say you are
Exceptionally masterful and *shine* on Dubstep.
This track is AMAZINGGGG!! Keep up the awesome work.
A Fave here 4 me :)
And put my sidechain a little bit.
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That being said, here is my suggestion to help with the mix.
Dynamics and automated motion. Right now, even though there is stereo separation, everything is still sitting in the middle. Try panning different elements of the drop to different spots on the left to right scale. With everything being in the middle it's all fighting for the same spaces and the frequencies are essentially tripping over each other and crowding up the joint.
Not only will that free up spaces for everything to come through more clearly, but it will give a much fuller, and dynamic sound. Making it bigger and and more grandiose.
As far as levels go, the volumes are all good. At least through my headphones. Everything seems to be sitting in the mix just right. Nothing really jumps out, or ducks behind. The sidechaining is a little heavy for my own personal taste, but that's just me. I've never really been a fan of that. So, take that bit of criticism for what it's worth.
The percussion is pretty good. The hats and cymbals are a little low in there. Maybe boost the volume on those. Again, if you can, maybe put a stereo separator on the claps. Widen them out. Bump the hi-hats off center just a bit.
I'm assuming that this is all original, and not a mix of loops...even though it is Looperman, home of the loops. So, again, take my opinions and criticisms for what they're worth. If they help, great. If they don't, then no harm, no foul.
Overall, excellent work. I'm looking forward to hearing what you come up with in the future.
Take care.
V.
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Anyways, can't believe you just tried riddim, even though it looks like you've already done a lot!
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add a part with the x2 speed hit drums =)
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xD I don't believe that, but if its true, its really awesome, the double drop is sick xD
Jokes aside, I don't recall ever hear one of your tracks before so I have no idea at this moment what your usual comfort-zone tracks sound like.
But this is really awesome enough for me to put this on my play list instantly!
Awesome job!
+1fav
Cheers!
~Eighteen
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I may try a dubstep soon. Thanks for sharing this fav.
Ronabo
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Here's two tutorials that may help (they helped me a bunch):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7oOmX3JHwtE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EAGC2fUAU1M
Great work, keep it going.
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