Toil1

good music composition https://on.soundcloud.com/AMFH6Q8fB48QJzZjbz

I like the beat and the effects at the end. Kay0s

good work bro, great melody and beat and i really like the d-tuned idea it works really well proper hip-hop, a good listen

Cool track man i enjoyed my listen :)

Straight fire!

Beautiful. I just sat back and let this wash over me. Agree with others that some sort of minimal vocals would sit nicely on this. Well done.

A beautiful piece of music. For some reason, it reminds me of somebody watching the tide go in and out. Kay0s

Very pleasant production. You need a strong voice over the top to finish it off. Kay0s

I liked your sound and I also liked the melodic elements in your song. Now what is needed is a trap singer and the appropriate lyricsI wish you luck with this, it is very possible some of the LM members would give it a try.
Best regards, Anthony

Hi Toil1 nice beat.
Did think the (stick?) should be pulled down a bit, and overall the levels evened out.
All comments meant as constructive:-)

i like the change up with the guitar bass n drums are sweet good job

Urban concrete jungle contemplation journey to a Veranda in Spain in a lemon grove - I enjoyed the journey. Kay0s

beautiful melody

beautiful words bro, the music is so gentle, great speech, my kind of listening, suffered mental health all my life, until i accepted it myself, then a became stronger, yes im still vulnerable at times but i took control of it, im much happier

This might sound like a weird comment but if you are familiar with the PC game "Escape from Tarkov" this sounds like it belongs in menu music lol. I know you have it listed as hip hop but (at least my interpretation) I get cinematic vibes from this. I really particularly love that arp like instrument in the background that fades in and out. Well done!

Took me back this tune, reminded me of tracks like on the Trojan label ,reggae in the main, I'm guessing this would before your time, anyhows nice one.

haha the cow at the end is brilliant lol has a rag tag blues sound to it which is very cool

I've worked with your track
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/246983