You can do better!! Keep down the volume of the music, vocals are still a bit buried. Anyway quality of vocals get better than before. Remember the automation clip for the volume of the voice? you can decide where pump and where not. To improve quality, add some effects, as reverb, echo, and it maybe fits some subtle flanging. You have to raise the high frequencies too, 'cause now voice seems to be recorded in the shower box! ahahha. Another tip: set the drums in mono and add a small default reverb, best to 3% (this is how it works on FL Studio). Last tip: don't be in a hurry to release your track. I did da same mistake in the past, and the fixing i had to do was too much, the final quality was unsatisfying. Take your time, listen to the mix million times, you'll be surprised how much improvement and fixing you can do on your job!
Thank you, you are 100% right. I don't need to rush. I heard alot of improvement from the first version and got excited. It still needs work. Thanks again for all your help. I surely need it!!
Here is some suggestions: vocals are too buried under the sound, and their compression (and general quality) not exactly the best. So, this is a trick i've learnt recently: put the vocal track (the same) in several channels in the mixer and for each one change frequencies to get a better sound, then play them all together. Use compression to get an equal waveform, (allow to raise the lowest volume parts and, at same time, kills the parts that sounds too strong), last thing, eventually, create a volume automation clip for last fixing.
thank you for the tips. I'm trying new things, but for you to help me out like that. thank you. I've been re mixing for days and I thought it was good. thanks again!!
Pump up the volume dude! In your place i maybe try to differentiate the music on female vocals... the drums are so good, maybe you can implement them with some adding percussions to make more catchy. Well done, but you absolutely can do so much better!
There are a lot of good elements in this. There's a solid vision, the lyrical content, the hook, the sound is clear, the effects are pretty well placed. The thing that bothered me is that the track seems sped up. Like the tempo is faster than it should be, or the original recording has been sped up. Either way, all the singing sounds rushed. Other then that, the track is a good example of this type of music.
it sound clean and it easy to hear what your are saying but for me it dont seem as the bpm is the same on all samples and im unsure where the sound comes from.
#1 appreciate the comment.
#2 its not my singing or rapping,
#4 the BPM are all identical(its one Long beat)
#5 I just produce the beat download the Acapella and make
the track.
at least it clean....and easy t.o hear
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#2 its not my singing or rapping,
#4 the BPM are all identical(its one Long beat)
#5 I just produce the beat download the Acapella and make
the track.
at least it clean....and easy t.o hear
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