the whistle is contretemps with the piano try to adjust that whistle an the first 3 notes of the piano are very very wrong beside that it`s cool :D you can put a funky ass bass an you are finish
Haha, very nice track. I don't know much about hip hop, so you'll have to forgive me if I suggest something that crosses with the genre.
In my opinion, it's extremely repetitive, and that's what killed it for me. In fact, it sounds more like a loop than it does an actual song. Change it up a bit, man! Give it some life! I know it's hard to come up with something that goes along with a classical loop like that, but it would show more if you tried going along with it, rather than leaving it alone. Cheers!
i like da beat,pretti smooth mah G,like d hook also,if it wuz alil bit harda wit dat hook,it wuld b alot mor 2wrk wit!keep it up,good potential ova here.
dig it cuz.....so, looking for a flow to add to it/just getting back in the rap game/ain't flowed in a decade but now i got that itch/hunger...been messing with some beats myself/trying to figure it all out right now..in Murrieta, ca...collabo? can send you a few lines if you wanna judge the content...mike
yeah no doubt write to it some hard ass lyrics and send it to me ...at ozwarlegacy@yahoo.com and ill see if its dope ill put it and mix it and give it to u...if u want check out my myspace page and listen to my beatz its www.myspace.com/ozwarlegacy ..peace
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In my opinion, it's extremely repetitive, and that's what killed it for me. In fact, it sounds more like a loop than it does an actual song. Change it up a bit, man! Give it some life! I know it's hard to come up with something that goes along with a classical loop like that, but it would show more if you tried going along with it, rather than leaving it alone. Cheers!
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