break up the drumbeat with some buildups or pads somewhere (giving it some space to really breathe) and i think you've got a more slammin track there. around the 3:48 point with the new synth lead....no beat, just space, staggerred drumbeat coming back in....might give it a nice kick in the pants.
You have a nice melody and I like that little vocal sample you studder, what you should do is continue to studder until it fades out and bring in reverb as it goes.
You always talk about getting famous, so I'm going to go over track structure of trance that is going to be a necessity if you ever want to release something. I don't really know the structure of trance songs, but more energetic trance is pretty similar to hardcore, trance with less energy may have a different thing going on. When you release your song your going to release it for a DJ's, not just for listeners, the DJ has to be able to mix it into his set. So you need an intro that has a bass drum so they can beatmatch from the other song. You progressively add drum and bass into the mix every 8 to 16 bars in the intro. You may even bring in the melody for a bit. Then a breakdown, in trance its probably going to be something mellow, and smooth, an orchestra and a choir, they may be related to the melody in a way, some ambient synth, or vocals are often common if you have them. Next you start building for a chorus, then you have the chorus, which usually is a minimum of 24 bars. You keep the drums/bass going for 16-24 bars and maybe add or subtract elements from the beat. Then have another breakdown, build, chorus, then slowly detract elements from the mix.
This could be completely wrong, but it should help.
Low-energy Trance. Not bad. Seems like you might have a couple of different pieces mixed into one though. Changes tenor a little abruptly in the middle. A little choppy overall but the essence of a good trance piece is there.
Nice catchy little intro number. I always have a weakness for Piano and this was well done. Not technically a song or a complete piece but well done. I would also call it House or Game or Cinematic even instead of Trance.
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You always talk about getting famous, so I'm going to go over track structure of trance that is going to be a necessity if you ever want to release something. I don't really know the structure of trance songs, but more energetic trance is pretty similar to hardcore, trance with less energy may have a different thing going on. When you release your song your going to release it for a DJ's, not just for listeners, the DJ has to be able to mix it into his set. So you need an intro that has a bass drum so they can beatmatch from the other song. You progressively add drum and bass into the mix every 8 to 16 bars in the intro. You may even bring in the melody for a bit. Then a breakdown, in trance its probably going to be something mellow, and smooth, an orchestra and a choir, they may be related to the melody in a way, some ambient synth, or vocals are often common if you have them. Next you start building for a chorus, then you have the chorus, which usually is a minimum of 24 bars. You keep the drums/bass going for 16-24 bars and maybe add or subtract elements from the beat. Then have another breakdown, build, chorus, then slowly detract elements from the mix.
This could be completely wrong, but it should help.
-DaMann
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Thanks for the review!
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