JoeyBonezSD1

This is definitely some dark ish! Reminds me of Wu-Tang style beat. All you need is some dope ash lyrics to got with it and it's a wrap.

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they's str8 deadly

sick track mayne, like da jada samples on top of the mix!!!

I like the idea behind it (the marching snare is a great idea for a war song)... however, the guitar riff doesn't develop anywhere and there isn't a huge payoff at the end to justify to buildup... the key to creating metal, even slower tempo trudging metal like this track, is by creating and weaving multiple riffs, almost like themes and variations. Have a listen to some of the later Ministry tracks (their music has a similar aesthetic, some of it was used in The Hurt Locker, awesome war film)... You may be able to vary it with some vocals or even a guitar solo melody in places...

Sorry if it seems like I'm ripping it apart, but it's cos I reckon with a few changes it could be an awesome piece... and fairplay for it being your first attempt at metal =]

Bonez, this is why you are one of my favorite artists. You can do ANYTHING in ANY genre. Damn, this is absolutely epic my friend. You are one highly skilled individual.

This song would be outstanding for any movie or video game about war. Hell, it could work for any movie, it's that good. The mix is stellar.

Bro, this is just fantastic. FAVED!!!!!!!

Bear

damn, nice drums !!!! oh yeah, and SBM kicks a-s-s man ! wow, you'd BETTER not leave this track unfinished or I'll kill everyone ! hahaha, I'm semi-serious, I can kill without physical damage bro

faved !

Killed Bonez. I love the march feel. Def dark and destructive. You tied everything together amazing. Great track man! Fav'd for sure.

nice stuff
epic buildup, you had me seeing war as well

imma listen somemore

eh man id like tp rap opver this can u send me the track pc man

yo this is tight dog.
i feel them scratchs. automatic track right here...
raw shit.

dats shit dere gangsta . i like it.

That's DOPE!!!