LoopTrap

It sounded just fine for a first attempt (some years ago of course). It is interesting throughout its duration and you could fade out its ending. There is always room for improvement, just follow your heart.
Best regards, Anthony

Good quality composition and v pleasant but I would say it is more pop than EDM

A beautiful theme...creative success!

cool tune man anymore ?

Nice melody work, the drums need better mixing. But that only comes with time for this being your first one, that's no issue at all. Idk why this is only now popping up for me to check out, but I'm glad I did. Nice work, hopefully you have done more since this.

Good work...A-ok. keep growing brother.

Sweet track nice synth works

This is so good if this is your first track i like the synth Work on this! Nicely done!

Nice! Any new songs coming out soon? :) There must be some melodies in your mind and you must have grown the past 3 years, right? :)
Looking forward to more!

Congrats on your first Loop Trap, nice sound, you've done yourself proud here nice synth and percussion and a great arrangement, I'm sure we will here more from u, well done bro

dope stuff man! Very monstercat vibes nice work!

Nice percussion and Synth lead. The whole thing Rolls along rather nicely. A bit piercing in spots though. A compressor on the track hitting the piercing frequencies can iron that out. It takes some trial & error to work all those details out. I've been doing this for 3 years now & I'm still working out details. Great job on this man.

Sounds great for your first full song.
I almost never listen to this genre but this was nice listening.

Hey, congrats on your first song. Nice melody you've produced. I would've made the drums a fair bit more prominent in the mix, but maybe that's just me, it's all personal preference after all. Nice work :)

i love the melodyy

Nice job