Your an awesome rap artist my friend. This track is amazing. I would suggest some more bass in your voice so that way your lyrics flow even better. Keep making tracks like this one and you'll go far.
dude you jus made my day, ive only been doin this fora less then a year and i dont see myself stoping anytime soon. its only gets better from here, thanks alot for the pointers i appreciate it
that's what's up my dude!!!! really like what u did with the track. u get major props from me. i want that download for my collection. if i can get that from u that would be cool. just shoot it to my email Bottleofchris@gmail.com.
hey brutha. nicely done. thanks for the comment good or bad, itll help me get betta.. ill put up tha full version of this song. i cut the song short because i hate it when people change or do sh*t to mah beatzz. but im cool witchyu dude.. keep it up..
Drop the "Hater" thing in intro. Start with first verse. Its hotter than the hook, sound wise. Alotta I's in my headphones. Drop a hook break down before verse, but dont run full hook. To make it still make sense.
Thats what Id do atleast. Do you though.
Feelin it, nice track.
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Sincerely,
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oh and by the way, im a female lol
anyway, im very happy you enjoyed the vocals, i will have that sent to u soon as possible, once again sorry and thank you
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Thats what Id do atleast. Do you though.
Feelin it, nice track.
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We should collab on a track. hmu.
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