Your an awesome rap artist my friend. This track is amazing. I would suggest some more bass in your voice so that way your lyrics flow even better. Keep making tracks like this one and you'll go far.
dude you jus made my day, ive only been doin this fora less then a year and i dont see myself stoping anytime soon. its only gets better from here, thanks alot for the pointers i appreciate it
Drop the "Hater" thing in intro. Start with first verse. Its hotter than the hook, sound wise. Alotta I's in my headphones. Drop a hook break down before verse, but dont run full hook. To make it still make sense.
Thats what Id do atleast. Do you though.
Feelin it, nice track.
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Thats what Id do atleast. Do you though.
Feelin it, nice track.
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We should collab on a track. hmu.
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