From a vocalist standpoint, there is definitely lots of room to be creative with vocals on this. I can appreciate that in a track, when it gives room for vocals to do their thing. Nice work. :-)
Thank you very much! That's excatly what I was aiming for.
Again, this is not the final track. I improved it, but didn't upload it.
I have listened to some of your tracks! Your voice sounds amazing!
I you are interested, I could send you the final production of this beat and you can use it for a song?
Concept it great. The tempo you might want to adjust. R&B is not the way it use to be. Pop and Trap have seriously undermined R&B these days so its rare to hear a ballad at this tempo. However the quality is high and the track is NOT overproduced. Good Job!
Like Danke said you should really add some bass in there, particularly a synth bass because most R&B songs use synth bass. I'd also add some type of chord progressions in a string sound effect to fill up the beat. Even some bells might work well with this beat. Last thing is add some diversity to how the Hi Hats are being played, so they annoy the listener from remaining the same(I was told that for a track I made a while ago by a professional producer). It's a great production right now though.
- Billion
Also, check out my tracks when you get the chance & leave some feedback. I'd say listen to my song "Anytime" first because it was my first song on here & it has an example of what I mean for the Hi Hats changing up. Keep it up!
first of all, it's great...not only because of the brilliant loop but for the atmosphere...but...you should use some bass (synth) and some brass (trumpet, sax) in some places...it would be the winner if you could find some vocs on it...anyway...it sounds cool on it's own too...
Thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate you taking your time to share your thoughts with me.
I will definately try out some different brasses, and add in a synth for the bass (as you said), and re-upload the beat when I'm finished. So please check my profile again in a few days ;).
Also, it would honestly be a dream coming true if some one would be interested in adding the vocals to this beat, or any beat of mine for that matter.
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It makes me silent...
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handshake, Danke
Have you heard the final version?
Thanks,
Jason
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Thank you very much! That's excatly what I was aiming for.
Again, this is not the final track. I improved it, but didn't upload it.
I have listened to some of your tracks! Your voice sounds amazing!
I you are interested, I could send you the final production of this beat and you can use it for a song?
Thanks again for the feedback and let me know!
Jason
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Thank you for your comment!
Jason
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May I ask what you will be doing with it?
Jason
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Thank you for your comment!
Jason
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- Billion
Also, check out my tracks when you get the chance & leave some feedback. I'd say listen to my song "Anytime" first because it was my first song on here & it has an example of what I mean for the Hi Hats changing up. Keep it up!
Thank you for your comment!
I used your tips (and what Danke said) to try to improve the beat.
I just uploaded it again.
I hope it sounds better ;)
Thanks!
Jason
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handshake, Danke
Thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate you taking your time to share your thoughts with me.
I will definately try out some different brasses, and add in a synth for the bass (as you said), and re-upload the beat when I'm finished. So please check my profile again in a few days ;).
Also, it would honestly be a dream coming true if some one would be interested in adding the vocals to this beat, or any beat of mine for that matter.
Thanks again,
Jason