KnightHeir

Great Job , i like the flow and the sub !

Liking the beat bro

Clean af keep it up!

Ey brother, I'm honestly really impressed by this.. played it back to back to back, mad respect. I've been watching you grow better and better throughout the months. Keep that momentum going fam. If you ever need me to drop a verse, I got you no cap. Get @ me

Also the flute is daf :)

Lol @ little bros dissing as inspiration for a track :D Sounds good to me!
It think it could benefit from some automation on the distorted 808's, like lfo tweaking and drop outs, detunes etc to animate the low end a little more.
Everything is working pretty good in this track.

the flow is so dope just lit

Nice Broo!!

fire!!! bars are dope! got the flow on lock very entrapping!!!!
i agree the mix could use some work, its a little distracting but i can see the bigger picture

dope work my man !!!!!!!
-CAP

Man this is dope. Cant wait for more!

haha I'd imagine you gotta take breaks when your writing or your notebook will light on fire. If you ever want me to do some mixing let me know man I'm down to work on some stuff. I be getting bored!

As per usual, you come in with the bars. Very odd mixing on your low end... why is there so much sub missing? And why did you choose to put it in stereo instead of mono? Your vocal seems to be very mono as well, I suggest adding 2 more layers of it and panning them out in the stereo field at a lower gain to add more clarity and width. Other then that, beat if fye. Delivery is fye, and them BARS are fye. Great work man.

This is awesome. Love the flow and love the lyrics. I see huge potential for this track and I look forward to it's future.

Digging this vibe!

That is great !
I really dig that efficient vocal and that italian/experimental/western groove

Keep on good job mate you got something very cool here !

YO FIREEEE DUDE!

I like it very much.. small remark...for my taste.. the drums are a bit too nervous it is masking the vocals .. don't forget ...silence is also an instrument .. check out some of my newer songs ..
I tried to use this little advice from a j-zee video ;-) .. I also need to lear a lot but it helps when making decisions .

I'll say one thing. MIXING you can learn it, the flow you bring on vocals, you cant.
Feel proud of this pal ! =D

this is dope af bro fire

This is a great track! looking forward to more in the future

as always you assaulting us with them lyrics bruh, them bars were too flames. throw us some more bass though! lots of mid and high end but theres hardly any sub, idk if this was intentional but I feel like a smooth bassline under the beat would make this a vibey ass song. great work my dude.

Yo, the intro is very well laid and pulls you into the trax. The lyrical content is on a hip hop(ish) vibe which is cool by me cause I Luv Hip Hop. Lastly, I read that you are trying out different flows, DO THAT SHIT MANE! Thats how you become unique.

Amazing vocal work and lyricism!! The beat is so smooth!! Good job on this

nice flow dude
really loved your art you are creating

peace

woow, so clean