Ive seen how some people take criticism on this site, but i still try to be true when i do. i think there could be a little more harmonizing in the beginning like behind the vocals. not too loud just a little faint. like at the "boy you know its clear to me" part. other than that i love the way this came out. you have extraordinary talent. and BMDR is sick with the productions.
as long it's constructive criticism, i have no complaints. I actually think its great when someone isn't afraid to speak the truth. It helps me become a better musician and helps my music get stronger, so don't feel bad. thanks for being honest :)
The quality of your song sounds very professional and pristine sounding. I agree with some of the other reviewers that it needs some backing vocals to give your song some extra oomph. By the way, nice work koble!
damn you got a nice amount of views, Well, im here to tell you that i liked the flow, I work with artist, if you have a acapella track you need a beat to im your man, but overall nice song.
Great voice Stephanie. This track came out great. Very polished. Great mix (lol)... ok ok a Good mix then. Your voice really suits the material on here and Erupt. Thanks for letting me try my hand on the mixes. This came out very well. :)
Good job on this, the vocals sound very good, I agree with COStly about he backing tracks, I think it would help the vocals sound even better, nice job on this, great lyrics.
very nice, lyrics are NICE, vocals sound great, may be me, but a couple more backing tracks on the vox would be awesome to add some depth to portions of the song,
your voice is slightly reminiscent of GAGA....cool pop song
everythings already been said. all thats left is to say this is a great track. vocals and beat are beyond solid. the rap is great, too. nice work...and yeah, Stephanie, i would love to work with ANY of your vocals. i think i could do them justice. i'm gonna go find you on myspace. :)
Great track here. Vox are good as gold (altho the auto tune is distressing, warping and warbling a little in parts)
The only thig i noticed that the track could maybe do with is.. the vocals are out of time with the track in parts. some chopping and Re-Editing would sort it out and would really make a difference to the finished track.
thanks :) yes it is a bit sloppy (vocally). i have a tendency to rush! Edwardo and Koble did an amazing job and i'm thankful i've had the chance to work with them and be surrounded by such amazing people!
Fantastic music!! Love it. Very fresh and clean, though yeh, there seems to be a little saturation on the higher frequencies. You rock Stephanie!! IN fact I was just uploading a mix I did of your Tonight vocals. Check it out! cheers, happy new year
I did not detect any hiss.
I think the melodic flow of the music is outstanding. Your vocals fits very well indeed. You could knock this one out of the park with a "balanced mix" as per Koble's sugestion.
I've heard your vocals on other tracks - I would not be surprised to hear you one day on the airways ( do they still call it that...cripes, I think I just dated myself ).
Take care Steph and well wishes for the new year.
Nice one Steph. Good solid dance piece. I'd like a slightly heavier music balance. Especially against the un-auto tuned vocal parts. The vocal is slightly too forward on my speakers. The lyrics are very good and your voice suits the music. I think a more balanced mix would benefit the track but overall it's a definite winner. (btw, didn't notice any hiss)
P.S. OMG! Who did that mix??? LOL. Faved this one. Hot Track! Excellent job Steph!!!
yeah this is so juicy u got me knockin furniture over. this is excellent 4 1 days wrk. i enjoy ur style its dance like club banger music but still has flavor tite wrk lil mamma.
i don't mean to be harsh in any way just constructive, but here goes. i can tell you put a lot of value into your other tracks but i like the quick rap best. i wanted more. your voice is very sexy when you talk. tonally your singing is correct. but on the others you dont push enough air and you dont succeed in making me believe in you. find the most horrific thing you can thats happened in your life and put that to your next vocal piece using metaphors ofcourse. bleed the vocal track, dont just sing it.
I did a slight adjustment on your track. It is good. You may need to add some additional instrumental support. The beat is repetitive which could explain the lack of lift. Send me an email address and I can send you the mix. It's got more bass, but there is also some minor vocal audio clips. I'll send what I was able to muster in twenty minutes.
I must say, very nice and you have a beautiful voice. My daughter listens to this song all the time so I hear it a lot, like it or not. But I could actually handle the song with your voice on it and my daughter said you 'Rocked it better than Britney' to quote. keep it up.
Wow, you have such a professional sounding voice. I was really impressed with this song. I have never heard the original so it gave me a chance not to be biased in any way while I listened to it.
I like the vocals and melody, but it just needs some bottom end....bass and a kick drum.
I have used your accapella "top secret" in a track I produced called....you guessed it...."Top Secret". That might give you an idea for some bottom end sounds. I am happy to help with the acapella or the track if you send me a copy.
This does have potential, so don't be too quick to throw in the towel.
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your voice is slightly reminiscent of GAGA....cool pop song
keep doin your thing!
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the beat is hot....i love itvery nice track
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Happy new year :)
Great track here. Vox are good as gold (altho the auto tune is distressing, warping and warbling a little in parts)
The only thig i noticed that the track could maybe do with is.. the vocals are out of time with the track in parts. some chopping and Re-Editing would sort it out and would really make a difference to the finished track.
Realy liked it tho,
Great work from all involved
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I think the melodic flow of the music is outstanding. Your vocals fits very well indeed. You could knock this one out of the park with a "balanced mix" as per Koble's sugestion.
I've heard your vocals on other tracks - I would not be surprised to hear you one day on the airways ( do they still call it that...cripes, I think I just dated myself ).
Take care Steph and well wishes for the new year.
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P.S. OMG! Who did that mix??? LOL. Faved this one. Hot Track! Excellent job Steph!!!
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Cheers :)
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Wow, you have such a professional sounding voice. I was really impressed with this song. I have never heard the original so it gave me a chance not to be biased in any way while I listened to it.
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I like the vocals and melody, but it just needs some bottom end....bass and a kick drum.
I have used your accapella "top secret" in a track I produced called....you guessed it...."Top Secret". That might give you an idea for some bottom end sounds. I am happy to help with the acapella or the track if you send me a copy.
This does have potential, so don't be too quick to throw in the towel.
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