StephanieKay

I did a slight adjustment on your track. It is good. You may need to add some additional instrumental support. The beat is repetitive which could explain the lack of lift. Send me an email address and I can send you the mix. It's got more bass, but there is also some minor vocal audio clips. I'll send what I was able to muster in twenty minutes.

Cheers :)

Hi StephanieKay,

I like the vocals and melody, but it just needs some bottom end....bass and a kick drum.

I have used your accapella "top secret" in a track I produced called....you guessed it...."Top Secret". That might give you an idea for some bottom end sounds. I am happy to help with the acapella or the track if you send me a copy.

This does have potential, so don't be too quick to throw in the towel.
Trax

the thing that is missing is some house snares and some hard low notes of a bass line...it would sound extremely beter than

cool. Nice voices. :)

Nice vocals.Nice track.

You have a wonderful voice but the song is 2 strong. Try a nice mellow song and u will land it. keep it up

is the other way around actually this song needs "bridges" that can connect the choruses , this song idea is just a series of choruses perfect for a catchy dance tune but if you want to build a pop tune you need to put some extra lyrics to connect your choruses.

I like this. I think the vocal effect was a nice choice..cool lyrics! The beat is definatly a club, I would like for it to have more bass. But, overall nice track

First of all the vocals are great..I think the drums should've come in with your voice, along with a bassline. Your right about it sounding like it has no life, I'm trying to figure out why! haha. I think the main beat has to be changed up when the chorus comes in. I might grab your pella and work on it!

Took your vocals and added it to my drum n bass track called 8am:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/46680

thanks - Paul.

as U kNOW Ur vOCALS r exPLiCabLe vERY sOFt buT hAS fEEl the bEAT IS AS yOu expLAiND my advice since its dance song and a lil livliness 2 wit some cybals or hit hit . but great job thoughoh and if ur puttin vocals up i would like 2 know were i can find them

I love your voice, but the melody can use a bit of work. I 'd like to take your acapella and see what I can make out of it

I would say that u need to arrange the beat a bit better, drop that arppregiated synth now and again, and that would give ur melody more life, plus a good mix would help out with the overall life...... if u cant figure it out, i would def like to give ur acapella a go

the vocals are nice but i would say get a more driving bass or some synth pads going to fill it out. Also it sounds a bit discordant at points. also up the bass on your kick a bit more! nice track though

Def needs a chorus. Sounds like the track is building and building. I was waiting for the chorus to come in. Needs a chorus for sure and mabey some sort of breakdown.

you have a nice voice, i like that bassy feel i would deffo get on the dancefloor :)

Good song, pretty vocals :)
I could maybe suggest adding some kind of strings in the middle of the song, to give it that extra bulkiness to support the vocals, sounds really good though

im diggn it steph!!nice job!!!!i want more!lol!!

nice accapella on this, tune has a laidback modern vibe. really cool

This is pretty good. We should collab and ill do the beat. Message me if your intrested.

I thought is sounded great! I hope you post some more.