The beat is lit! You should spend some time fixing the vocals. I don't know if it's me, but you sounded like you were rapping off beat in the beginning. And your voice sound really cloudy, and low. Take away the reverb, if any, and just add some simple delays & do natural rapping. Also, check out my track when you get the chance.
thanks for the help Billonz ,i touched it up a bit,removed the reverb and re uploaded it now,i checked out your whole page and i dig your style ,hope to hear more from you homie
Very nice and solid intro. Love how you start with acapella adn then slowly introduce the drums and synth. Maybe you could turn the beat a notch louder. The vocals are very clear and that is good but the beat doesnt hit enough now. Nevertheless a great track and fav!
This Song Is Really Good. Your Went Well With The Style Of The Beat. I'd Just Say Turn Up The Mic Next Time Cause I Couldn't Hear You At Some Parts Of It.
Did it , i did a specil instrumental for ya but when i tried to upload i've remembered an old good work... So see that instru , he is for ya homie ;) https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/177603
it's the old school instrumental , i can try to post you the new school soon (only one music that i can share in 24Hours) Sorry dude , HAVE FUN !!! I really love your rap & hope the better for ya !
Hi Listen to a few of ur tracks
this for me sounds a bit better over the others
For my tastes in general u should try to mix the voice better with the music, just my opinion of course!
Bye
Hey man ,thanks for the listen
i actually used a different software for this one and im still teaching myself so i'll hopefully get better with time
thanks ,i appreciate the feedback
Damn that shit was dope!!!! Love ur flow this life this flow. U done did good that awesome. I'll send u some tracks soon. Nice job I think we make a good team.
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If you're interested to rap for a song of mine, feel free to contact me.
yeah I really felt your beats ,i'll definitely hit you up soon homie
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i dig your style.
all you need now is to work on getting better sound of your vocal.
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Though i think the vox(vocals) is too dry, and probaly need some reverb.
Looking foward to more of you work Theshlin.
yeah im still trying to touch it up and see what sounds best,but thanks for the input
i like your stuff ,looking forward to more trap beats from you
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https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/177603
it's the old school instrumental , i can try to post you the new school soon (only one music that i can share in 24Hours) Sorry dude , HAVE FUN !!! I really love your rap & hope the better for ya !
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keep Grinding
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this for me sounds a bit better over the others
For my tastes in general u should try to mix the voice better with the music, just my opinion of course!
Bye
Max
i actually used a different software for this one and im still teaching myself so i'll hopefully get better with time
thanks ,i appreciate the feedback
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Looking foward to see more work from you.
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