I think that has to be one of the most moving tracks I've heard. I think if you had vocals added one day it would make this track such a hit (if it isn't already). The piano is perfect. Very nice listen. Thanks for sharing.
Gord
Beautiful track. I love how everything sounds. Everything is in harmony. The rhythm of the guitar is really good, the battery is extraordinary, and the piano tells the story ... I think you could make a version with lyrics (although this is already very good).
This is a real emotional piece. I love the piano work. The guitar could you use some spice in a few places but the overall composition is moving. Beautiful work. Keep it up.
Awesome track man, a lot of emotion to it, are you going to add vocals? If you are not I would really like to see if I can write something that would go with this, it is too good to be an instrumental only. Great job man, one of the best acoustic tracks I have heard.
it's so strange that when you feel about as beat as a person can possibly be you find a groove that matches that sadness but lifts you up and makes you keep going at the same time - this is a much appreciated track
Woa, instant fav!
I liked the drums very much up to 1:35, I'd like a better flow in the chorus (?). And the guitar sometimes sounds a little dull – like old strings. A bit more sparkle would do the trick.
It sounds a like a bunch of negative critique, it isn't. The track is beautiful and well composed.
/pmk
I got three words for you JACK THE RIPPER. This track really mad me think of the movie "From Hell". I could just visualize Jack The Ripper stalking some prostitute on the foggy streets of London with that track playing. Good Job!!
Nice theme. Good arrangement. Too much reverb on the piano though, it kind of gets lost in the strings some times. Would love to hear this re engineered, bassier and bigger drum sounds perhaps (but precisely where you've used them in your arrangment)and deeper, bassier string sounds - more cello and double bass may do wonders. All in all, very nice.
Very cool, so atmospheric! I picture a scene from a game or film where the main antagonist turns to the dark side - as if he was once an ok guy but something terrible happened which twisted him into a villain.
Ok, pretty weird description but I hope you get what I mean.
Sounds like metal to me, bro. The guitars are nice (if a bit loud in spots), and the drum machine rocks. Don't know what kind of software you use, but if you've got a soundfont player there are some awesome freebie acoustic drum SF's. So, if you really don't like the drum machine sound, there are definitely other options. If you want to know more, just contact me ~ I can line you out with just about anything.
thanks =] i've been trying to get a hold of AD but it cost money...so i just said screw it, i use alot free samples and use FPC from FL =/ but hey im glad you liked it and thanks for the tips! =D i should try SF.
i disagree with your statement jjy. i would consider this metal. good metal at that. i do think that the drums could be a tick louder (just a tick) to better match the guitar but then again i am a critic. great song keep up the good work!
Some heavy rythmguitars earlier would be awesome on this. Although the track itself as it is, is great. The guitar might be a bit loud compared to the rest of the mix at times, but still a fast-paced and driving track that makes you sit and listen in excitement of whats coming up next.
Well done jjy.
thanks alot! i think i'll take your advice and turn down the guitars a bit and see if i can make it to where it doesn't brick wall as much. thanks a lot for taking the time to listen.
as being one of the first to listen to that i thought it was well composed not to heavy not to light just right,awesom himonics i think youve got something going here.keep it up,great job
kia ora
Quite a nice structure here, Eurotrance sounding with some cool piano and pad lines. Lead chord synth a little too distorted for my liking though. Not bad. Greetz, --Davey--
Nice crisp drums and good arrangement. Kinda me reminds of the movie Hustle and Flow (whoop that trick), but your melody is a little more subtle and the bass is not so overpowering. Pretty good job there.
You want to know what think? F*** YEAH, that's what I think, real metalcore like stuff except that the vocals are actually good. The only thing it's missing is a kick ass guitar solo, (one would actually fit pretty well at 2:17), anyways great song.
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For me the bass should be higher!
Nice work
Ciao, K
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Gord
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I liked the drums very much up to 1:35, I'd like a better flow in the chorus (?). And the guitar sometimes sounds a little dull – like old strings. A bit more sparkle would do the trick.
It sounds a like a bunch of negative critique, it isn't. The track is beautiful and well composed.
/pmk
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Ok, pretty weird description but I hope you get what I mean.
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Peace,
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Well done jjy.
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kia ora
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BTW...CHeck out my new Stuff ;)
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cheers
-Shaun
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What about you call it "Dark Invasion"
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