Nice track man, really good build up and nice use of complimentary sounds and effects..
The Bass is indeed big and bouncy, lol.
Altho its panned quite hard rite and sounds a little strange in this position as its such a low frequency sound. I try to use the rule that the higher the frequency the wider it should be either stereo width or panning wise. so that sound i would plonk rite bang in the middle of the mix, maybe even with a bit of side chain compression to make sure it dont interfere with the kick.
At the moment the kik is pitched quite low and is hitting at about 42hz which is a little to far down. try cutting everything below about 30/40hz and use a eq to pull down 42hz by about 4/5db and raise up 62hz & 110hz by about 2db.
Also layering the kik up with a fat hat and snare with a chunky bottom end would make it cut through the mix like a hot knife through butter.
Hope you dont mind the comments... its all ment constructively..
Like the track tho dude, cant wait to hear somemore
Awesome track you have here man. Reminds me of Deadmau5 quite a bit. That lead is so good. The atmosphere created by the melody it plays really stands out to me and the voices that play through the build-ups are a nice addition too. They really compliment the lead.
One thing that crossed my mind though is that it's repetitive. It doesn't really variate, it's basically the same melody and beat through-out the whole song. Try making some alterations of the melody and complete the song structure more. Don't just be generic either. Mess with some odd song structures and you might come across something perfect :P. And to make things even more interesting, try experimenting with some odd sounds to go along with the beat. The more stuff you layer into the song, the better it's gonna get! But don't get me wrong, I mean no offence, it's good the way it is and if you like it the way it is, keep it 'cause you made it after all :P.
Anyways, that's about all from me. It's an awesome song and one of the better house tracks I've heard on this site. Keep it up!
Nice track mate really enjoyed it even listening on the shitty laptop speakers - I willl d\load tonight and get a proper listen in the studio - as already mentioned that pumpin sound really does the business.
You have a really nice pumping action going on with this track and the bassline is really good. This is almost more or less, vocal trance, a bit slower in tempo with an off-beat bassline which you actually use as a bassline and a melody, well done. Nice melody too, quite uplifting. The 5min mark was really cool, that synth sounds really nice. And that pumping action really gives it a nice feel. Excellent work.
Only signed up to loopermaster there now, seems quite good :D.
Your track sounds aright to me mate, try using parallel compression on the main kick because it sound very dry. This will umph it up if u know what I mean. You could also add some club type reverb to it. Should sound mint after that if you tweek it correctly.
Good track, but nothing will compare to a pro tools or qbase system for synths etc.
Also makeing the snare deeper and add a kick underneath it. After that id say you would have yourself a sweet track.
Love this track mate, really like the build up, also the delayed affect from your synths, only thing I notice and it might have been the affect you were after DJ but the little kicks in the beat actually seem to distract from your track, My thinking is maybe not have them there and have it more flowing in the beat, just my thoughts, do really like the sounds you have going here, the choir vocal affect I think really suits the track DJ..
so love the tinkering synths at the start then the build up to the track, so different from the other bonkers song that we have here in Australia, I would say like what you have done better then that one,I would poss suggest lifting the beat up a little maybe, just a thought, love as it is still, adding to fav's my friend..
yep like where you are going with this track mate, again would love to hear the finished track, but sounds like it is going to be a good one, keep it up hey...
I see man. Well just keep messing around. the biggest thing is your "Sounds" try out new VST's and such like ReFX Nexus and what not. I use ableton, and for some reason ableton seams to have a better overall quality when you produce a track. It is almost as if it does some mastering for you. Anyways, just keep tryin man, you will suceed.
Yea hes good. Workng Progress actually had a bit of a progressive house feel to it, if you delayed that pad or side chained it it would be progressive. Try out different things, are you more into trance or deadmau5 sounding stuff?
no the house has taken over i like trance alot to i think thats where my love for house cums from orginally tho, not sure. ive been trying to hit my style for so lng an tonight ive kinda got there ive only been using fl studio for 3 mnths but cubse etc.. lnger thanks mate
Yea its a good song. I will defianetly crack open the 11 past 1 file and re-up it a bit and through it back on. Listened to it again and it actually does have a good rythm. thanks alot man. I can see you like deadmau5 alot lol, u love to mention him lol.
yea i like them all i just lyk the over all quality of his work, check out my workng progress dude or was that the 1 you reviewd? sorry ive been working all yr to define mystyle lol.
Hey man, i dig the intro on this track. Its almost like some sort of Tiesto intro. I defianetly see where you were going with it man. Make more stuff like this. One thing though, make your kick a bit more punchy.
yea ive hit my stride here i think. ima keep it up love this deadmau5 feeling, wooohoo, cheers for the review buddy, yor tunes rock, you havta master 11 past 1 its like brazil by deadmau5 subtle but sweet!
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Nice track man, really good build up and nice use of complimentary sounds and effects..
The Bass is indeed big and bouncy, lol.
Altho its panned quite hard rite and sounds a little strange in this position as its such a low frequency sound. I try to use the rule that the higher the frequency the wider it should be either stereo width or panning wise. so that sound i would plonk rite bang in the middle of the mix, maybe even with a bit of side chain compression to make sure it dont interfere with the kick.
At the moment the kik is pitched quite low and is hitting at about 42hz which is a little to far down. try cutting everything below about 30/40hz and use a eq to pull down 42hz by about 4/5db and raise up 62hz & 110hz by about 2db.
Also layering the kik up with a fat hat and snare with a chunky bottom end would make it cut through the mix like a hot knife through butter.
Hope you dont mind the comments... its all ment constructively..
Like the track tho dude, cant wait to hear somemore
Thanks for sharing :)
on Venting Anger by DjBA5
One thing that crossed my mind though is that it's repetitive. It doesn't really variate, it's basically the same melody and beat through-out the whole song. Try making some alterations of the melody and complete the song structure more. Don't just be generic either. Mess with some odd song structures and you might come across something perfect :P. And to make things even more interesting, try experimenting with some odd sounds to go along with the beat. The more stuff you layer into the song, the better it's gonna get! But don't get me wrong, I mean no offence, it's good the way it is and if you like it the way it is, keep it 'cause you made it after all :P.
Anyways, that's about all from me. It's an awesome song and one of the better house tracks I've heard on this site. Keep it up!
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Regards
Krook
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Your track sounds aright to me mate, try using parallel compression on the main kick because it sound very dry. This will umph it up if u know what I mean. You could also add some club type reverb to it. Should sound mint after that if you tweek it correctly.
Good track, but nothing will compare to a pro tools or qbase system for synths etc.
Also makeing the snare deeper and add a kick underneath it. After that id say you would have yourself a sweet track.
All the best.
on Venting Anger (final edit) by DjBA5
Love this track mate, really like the build up, also the delayed affect from your synths, only thing I notice and it might have been the affect you were after DJ but the little kicks in the beat actually seem to distract from your track, My thinking is maybe not have them there and have it more flowing in the beat, just my thoughts, do really like the sounds you have going here, the choir vocal affect I think really suits the track DJ..
Well done mate
Estefano
on Bonkers by DjBA5
so love the tinkering synths at the start then the build up to the track, so different from the other bonkers song that we have here in Australia, I would say like what you have done better then that one,I would poss suggest lifting the beat up a little maybe, just a thought, love as it is still, adding to fav's my friend..
Estefano
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cheers
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yep like where you are going with this track mate, again would love to hear the finished track, but sounds like it is going to be a good one, keep it up hey...
Estefano
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like this track mate, nice heavy base, goes brilliant in this, nice build p to the track also, well done man...
Estefano
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Cheers, brad.
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Cheers, Bradd.
Keeep upthe tunage :)
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