Hey man, I've been listening to a lot of trap lately.
Your ideas are good, just need to rearrange the segments around i think.
After 33secs, drop the big trap drums from 1.12, then carry on from where u left at 36secs.
At the very end where the track ends, carry on with the trap drums again but introduce that percussion instrument that you had at the beginning intro (marimba/kalimba??) into the drum mix for that Caribbean feel.
Hope this was helpful bud.
Keep up the creativity.
Blessings - B.
Sounds nice guy! Good job on the collab ! Must be nice to actually collab with someone and come out with a good finished product. I think between 1:00 and 2:00 the track got really dry may be some subtle bass arps would have helped. Other than that you guys should do another one. I'm also always up for some collabs if your interested in collabing with a rookie lol.
I can definitely tell this was made in FL haha. But still soooooo good. Those kicks and hats give it away. Can't stop listening to this man. Thoroughly enjoyed. And that wobble... it's awesome. Keep it up bro!
Interesting..........but Would you like some analysis & production advice? Have a listen to one or two of my tracks and if you think my advice would be valid I'll help.
hi mr Doctor. this is a kind of a happy tune. when the hihats come in at 1:32 it sounds almost like a techno track, at least to me. it is a bit too straightforward for a very proper house but still a good try. keep up the production!
Melody is pretty nice and the drums sound really well to this track. But the track is way too loud. All sounds are fighting for all frequencies. Try to limit them. And try to variate more. Then it stays interesting...
piano ok. it gets some depth even (the very moment when drums comes in).
Overall the piano is played too low (overall). From 2:40 I enjoyed it because you seem take off all these elements for a moment. Nice start! and very great ourto (outro)
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Your ideas are good, just need to rearrange the segments around i think.
After 33secs, drop the big trap drums from 1.12, then carry on from where u left at 36secs.
At the very end where the track ends, carry on with the trap drums again but introduce that percussion instrument that you had at the beginning intro (marimba/kalimba??) into the drum mix for that Caribbean feel.
Hope this was helpful bud.
Keep up the creativity.
Blessings - B.
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Great job and well done.
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Nice Melody And Downlifter
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MG
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piano ok. it gets some depth even (the very moment when drums comes in).
Overall the piano is played too low (overall). From 2:40 I enjoyed it because you seem take off all these elements for a moment. Nice start! and very great ourto (outro)
Doctor to you,
Pyro
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