meph

Sup meph! Pretty dope track Definitely has a chill vibe!
Okay, so the 1st build has more energy than the 1st drop/chorus. I think the vocal is really good and I think it is getting smothered in the song by everything else going on I would take parts out and focus more on mixing the vocals perfectly so they can control the energy and emotion and then add just enough elements to support the building of the vocals natural energy (as it stands right now the vocal is fighting certain synths for space in almost all the builds).

some fills, breaks or turn arounds on the 2,4,8,16 bar will help keep things fresh during the drop

Saturation would help overall with the thin feeling from the track.
Reverb

Pretty dope track I think it just needs some touchups is all

Woooooo!! It's sound really great!! I did a version too, please listen and rate it! https://soundcloud.com/alberto-patera/six-feet-under-kyle-monroe-feat-alberto-patera

brilliant track from every aspects except the end...it's a bit abrupted...

handshake, Danke

First off; Great piece. Secondly very good vocal arrangement with professional range. One the best loops [song] I've heard here: in this forum. Keep doing what you've been doin' and know that you have what it takes, I know life gets in the way but, Good musical vibrations you've got. Peace DDC