Deathbot

Definitely going to gI

No good that short!!!!
Give us more more more.

This is punktastic!

such a beautiful song

Hey, this is pretty sweet! I'm getting vibes of some cool eighties/nineties groups from this, such as social distortion or rancid, both of whom I like to listen to. Do you have ideas for a lyrical theme which you wish to portray? Very fun and cool song! I enjoyed it!

Garage Greenday Great Feeel. Keep 'em comin' Deathbot.

Great song...very powerful and melodical...but the end is abrupt, should get a final cymbal, kick, guitar chord and bass note...:-)

Respect, Danke

This was entertaining which is the whole point.
Works great.
This sounds nothing like Frank Zappa.
Nothing remotely like Frank Zappa yet it reminded me of Frank Zappa!
Maybe I've had to much medication ....

I enjoyed ... thanks

no weird really....and doesn`t sound like prune juice Deathbot....noted you said you were mixing on something other than quality speakers or phones...well, I`ve been mixing since tape days and I don`t think I could do any better with cans...I do think that the low end is missing..a nice fat bass line would bump it up nicely..but must say it sounds pretty good to me....keep on...Ed

I have to agree with the others, sounds good to me. Lots of things going on, but it all fits somehow. Interesting piece for sure!

whatever your concerns I was not distracted by mixing issues at all. your use of vocal clips is brilliant. you have a great sense of humor in your music. i like the contrast between the upbeat music and all the angry cursing! nice work.

I really do not think it is musically out of line. It is a very enjoyable type of vocal shotted musical driveby. The drums and meldoy are sticking in your ear and the vox are well put into the mix. Im not a master in mixing but for me there were no things really out of shape. I liked it very much. Thanks for sharing.

I agree with S.Nomad on this, some great parts, interesting ideas, needs some work. Hopefully we will see it here soon!

Yo.

"I was inspired by those crazy guitar solo's fueled by intense feedback that you only get at live gigs"

This source of inspiration makes sense to me.

I've used dirty, distorted synths in place of guitar in loads of tracks. Sometimes alongside guitar, sometimes not.

Anyway, this has a pretty cool, dirty vibe. Not quite sure where to take it except to suggest that you develop more riffs so that you can extend it by at least a couple of minutes.

Mix sounds pretty decent though maybe one of those synths shouldn't be panned so far to the left. This just sounds like a sketch, as I think you know, so keep going with it, throw some more ideas at it and I think you might end up with a pretty cool, full track.

Mi piace.. Ottima traccia!

Hi again DB!
This is kind of a crazy piece of music - great bass guitar (or is it a guitar?) and I actually loved the outro from 2:18 and to the end! You should evolve that part with that heavy bass. Funny lyrics!

Cheers and take care! / SJ =)

I think I downloaded all of alividlife's drum loops, think I just listened to this one the other day. I use ez drummer, easy and real drums as well. The main riff reminds me of Turning Japanese by the Vapors.

Lots of energy. Needs some bad ass bass now and some vox with attitude. So far so good as a starting point, look forward to hearing it finished!

Wayne

mesmerizing groove. interesting sounds also. I hope you are well and doing some work recently. look forward to hearing more from you! regards - Dan

Pretty cool track, it has a cool edgy sound to it, a bit industrial and rock with some electronic elements to it. I would suggest putting some more volume on the final mix, I did crank it up though. I like it, mix sounds decent. Big deep bass, yup, like that! Not too sure about the clapping and vocal parts but the music rocks. Reminds me of Fatboyslim and the Chemical Bros. style of music, electronic rock.

Good stuff!

Wayne

Hi DB hope all is well;)
I'm still learning too and although i understand the physics of sound i still struggle to get a good mix mainly because the room where i produce is NOT acoustically treated so i cannot hear the sound accurately.

To get a accurate mix and mastering you will need at least a pair of Studio Monitors and an acoustically treated room which can be done quite cheaply See Here : http://www.soundonsound.com/sos/dec09/articles/beginnersacoustics.htm
Without these two elements it's hard to get a good mix.

However if you don't have them the best you can do is listen to your mix in as many different speakers/headphones as possible and make notes of the problems you might find and then is a question of compromise and test what works best.
Also compare it to commercial music of the same kind just so you have an idea of what's good and whats not.

Here's a few articles that really helped me but there's a lot of stuff on you tube too if you prefer video.
http://heroicrecordings.com/essentials-good-mixing-mastering/
http://www.soundonsound.com/sos/feb99/articles/20tips.478.htm

I hope this points you in the right direction, let me know if you have any doubts i will be happy to help :)
Peace....
WB

Hello DB!

I like it especially the guitar, the tune is different and very original.
I do Agree with asidRn's review though.
Another thing i noticed is that the track lacks clarity and sounds muddy at times, better mixing and mastering would quickly sort it out.
Let me know if you do make changes as i would like to hear it.

Best Regards
WB

Deathbot
Hello
It is a great track; wired, peculiar, interesting.
Very balanced with a mad ending.
Well done
Jamid

Thanks, greets.

good gen