I dont know if you over-layered your kicks or boosted some strong frequencies but they are overloading the track. And the chime is strong also and maybe used to many times in the track. But Keep up the hard work, nice start. (by the way, just my opinion.)
Reminds me a bit of Flying Lotus. Sickkk, makes me wanna hop back in my hip hop bag. Gotta do me some new works, this one knocks though bro. Fused with a little glitch and ambient. Impressive. Catch ya later. peace
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