tsochai

hello there CAP i can hear you have a fine mic but the loops feels to high for the vocal so you should turn up on your vocal so it fit the sound with loops. and if there comes to much background noise you could try out Adobe Audition CC and use a effect called Denoise then turn up till it remove all noise but it will maybe feel a bit deeper but you can fix that by use a effect you can have in ableton named eq-three where you control low/mid/hi maybe there is a effect in fl studio that can the same there is as well in Adobe Audition CC

This deserves more love Cap, you made this whole thing with samples from guys from here, and thats amazing, its like giving job to other people hehe.
Im a very visual guy , so a little video could give it more "playability" online , it'll add a something extra for the casual listener to be hooked on.
Cool stuff homeslice !

It was different in a good way. I liked it!

This goes hard!

I think the timing of the rap is really great. The delivery is expressive. The production works well under it. Good luck with further development. Regards - Dan

Yo, I str8t dig the Devin da Dude style bro. In todays rap most katz sound the same but I can honestly say your style is defiant in a good way. Keep being you CAP cause it works brah. Word up.

This one goes hard! Good work dude keep it up

i think the rapping is very cool. and I think the words are really clear which is a pleasure. i think also the mix is very rich. nicely done. great to hear your work. all the best in the New Year! Dan

really cool track here, the flow is awesome and i'm okay with comments: it sounds like cypress. i will go on your soundcloud to watch your page!

great work CAP!
Bleep

This goes hard!

nice....can you post the acapella so i can do a remix lyrcs fire

I agree with damonb, really sounds like cypress xD

~Eighteen

hey man great flow you got at first you should had keep the flow all the way then i bet it would be a hit. keep up the good work!

Kinda reminds me of 21 savage and eminem lowkey bro. Nice!

Nice!

Nice style

И,Будь добр,скажи,нравится ли тебе такая тематика битов?Просто мне кажется я однообразен

Это очень круто брат,в первый раз кто то записывает вокал на мой бит.У тебя очень круто получается,продолжай двигаться дальше!Успехов тебе

This is a nice track here. You did a good job vocally, but I'd personally change the delivery style cause it doesn't match the energy of the beat. Seems a little off to me, but either way it's a good track. Definitely look into making longer ones.

- Billion

P.S if you could leave some feedback on the track I put recently that would be greatly appreciated.

Nice Style Bro ...
A lot of creativity in the beat ;-)
Its a happy mood song so could be easily go longer ..
I would maybe change the vocal style/effects to take it on the same level as the beat .
But all in all a nice happy mood track ;-))

mannn we gotta link up on a track

im loving the vibe of this ...u rode that beat too..yessir

I might have said this before, but you really remind me of Doctor Octogan.

Love the tune, and the message, it's something we can all relate to at one point or another.

And this is so much better to my ears than commercial gangster rap as well, could quite happily listen to a full album of yours. Keep up the good work my friend, and thanks for sharing :)

I am no hip-hop (nor rap, nor trap for that matter) expert.
Still, I really enjoyed the song.
Maybe if you want make it more "commercial" (whatever this means) the advice from CentralsDev and Danke is a good one: you need a solid chorus. Which you should also highlight with a change (uplift) in the beat IMHO.
Also, your beat would benefit from a bit more "motion" in the bass-line.
Good flow.
Overall, as I said, I really enjoyed the song.
Keep the good work.
Ciao, Domenico

Hey Tsochai, The chords are nice. I like the muted guitar that comes in and out of the track. Your rap is cool too... I dig the message. Keep it up!

Ronabo