mostaf68

yes definitely add some drums on the first part along with sidechained white noise, would sound fuller. and keep the sitar-ish sound going on the last drop (with sidechain on the sound)

I liked the intro.
Keep developing the melody some more, after the drop maybe? It sounds a bit..unmelodic or messy? And add some sweeping pads and drums.

Good start!

Cheers/ SJ =)

hmm, well, you know, somehow I don't find integrity in this track. by that, I mean it's more like three different songs mixed together. or.. better to say it sounds like a mix which is the preview of an upcoming album, not a single track. so you do find connection between parts, but not enough to make a whole song, maybe it's the transitions you better work on. also, I still think the beginning could be improved. like I said earlier on the previous version, you could probably mix things a little, and not just add beats one by one. dunno, maybe it's just me getting used to this new progressive trance of Naden, but I really suggest you check out his work for hints, that dude certainly knows what he's doing. again, it's nice to see you making progress on this track, keep the spirit alive! ;)

the moment it begins, you're falling in love with the track, but that feeling doesn't last any long :(
more of that please! :D