AngelDelarosaJr

When I listen to a new song, I always look at the drums. And this song handles that perfectly. Now the piano is another one. It's definitely a dope one

I love the piano and strings. I am not feeling the low octave horn i just take away from the track.

Angel: This is my favourite track of your, for sure. First, I like the fact that you have lots of dynamic range in the track. Everything is not maxed out. Makes it much more interesting. Generally, I think you have really good beats for all your tracks and this one is especially good. I like the variation you used in the main melodic line in this track. Generally, if I had a comment on your tracks, it would be that your melodic lines tend to use repetitive eighth notes almost exclusively, so there isn't as much variation in the melody lines as there could be. You might be doing this on purpose, but unless you aiming for a true "trance" effect, I think it would be really interesting to hear you introduce more variation. Melodies, are basically just arpeggios, but with variations in the duration of the notes and the sequence. I can hear that you've got a good ear for a catchy melody/hook, so I'd encourage you to experiment with this aspect of your music. For this track, I'm definitely hearing a really smooth vocal line layered over top. If you'd allowed downloads I would have probably attempted a remix adding a vocal melody line using a synth patch. I can't sing, but I have fun sometimes adding melody lines to tracks that other Looperman members have uploaded. I don't get inspired to that with a whole of tracks, but this one definitely tweaked my interest. That means, as far as I am concerned, it has something that really connected with me. I liked it a lot.

dope track thanks for this

love the beat mang

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