Well this is just awesome. I guess you made whatever changes were suggested earlier because what you have sounds really good to me so far! Super intense and epic. Can't wait til it's finished.
I don't like the constant use of cymbals/hits whatever is going on there on the second part of your track (and notably the transiton) it sounds bad, synthesized and takes away from the rise and puncture of the track. The strings could also use some work on the updated part - the melody is good but they sound terrible (maybe its the VST?). Also, your cymbals need more of a "punch"...I don't like the transition between the first part and the updated part - I get you were struggling on that, but I think you can do way better on that transition. I know I said I was going to work on the original part for you but I got busy haha. I'll try and add elements I think your track could benefit from and post them up here in a timely manner. I don't know what genre you want from this, but if your serious about making an "orchestral" track i'd invest in a VST like Albion 3 - I know money may be tight and you may not be able to access these types of high quality resources which is why I am offering my help. Best regards, CK.
That probably was the best comment i ever got, thank you very much for the neutral critisism!
I appreciate it! i will change the cymbals, i would have anyways, this is just the starting phase of the track.
Im using Action strings, strikes and session strings, i dont really have anything else, since it costs money.
Much money.
But i will check out albion 3 and if its good i will get it.
I will change the project and try to fit in other Fx etc., please keep being around so i can hit you up!
Super bro. I like it. This is something there. If you develop the theme, it will be Epic! After listening to this track, I appeared at the very idea) Flying into FL Studio)))
it's nice, it's like a developing story. I suggest coming up with a "twist" as in a story (changing the tune towards the end) then the music flows at constant level to denote resolution of the conflict as implied in the music.
The track sounds great, but the one thing that really irked me was the piano sounded very midi-ish. I'd suggest adding more sustain to help it flow better. Great work overall though.
Sure. Send me your email address in a private message. So, i will reply you and we start to work tomorrow. It's a pleasure collab in a cinematic track. If you want, check my tracks and loops, so you'll have an idea of how I can do.
We can work with a software like teamviewer, and you can use muy library from your computer. And when you render the instrument, you can delete the midi file. So, you'll have a nice sound forma your track.
Thats actually a great idea, im impressed. I think i would save them as wave files and send them to my email, so i can continue to work with them at my computer.
Lets do this like tomorrow, okay? i need your computer ID as well.
With my comment below I don't mean that I'll give you my instruments, but they will be at your total disposal when you need (if you want). Think con it like a collab.
I am confused, what do you mean with "at my total diposal"? I mean, would be really great to have some Vocal libraries and damage, the only ones i have are action strings and session strings.
I mean, i would really appreciate the libraries, but i dont know how you could "give" them to me. :D
Your track sounds awesome, and I really want to help you. Sadly I know nothing of music. Even if I can finish your track in my head, I can't express how to do it. The only thing I can do is offer you my instruments. I have good ones for cinematic tracks like cinematic strings 2.1, symphobia colours orchestrator, cinebrass core, heaviocity damage, drums of war 2.0, the giant piano, and many vocal and choir libraries like voxos, olimpus micro, cantus, mercury, mystica, shevannai and clara's vocal. That's the only help I can offer. Hope you can finish your track, because sounds great.
I like what you got so far man, its awesome like you stated. I think what you should add next is a nice indian flute with a small reverb to it. Also try adding a low filtered congo playing in the background. You can transition into this, in many different ways. An easy way to go about it, would probably be by adding a reverb kick and slowly have the flute fade in.
After the flute does it's solo, bring in those strings sound from the beginning, making them slightly more aggressive, note wise. Then go from there. That's all I have for now, if I come up with some other ideas, I'll let you know. But, very nice work thus far!
It sounds really cool, even right now! I'd love to help, would you be able to email the stem files to me, then I might be able to add some more to it that can help you. You could then add it to this? :)
Can you attach things with the Contact Me on my page, or do you need my email?
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I appreciate it! i will change the cymbals, i would have anyways, this is just the starting phase of the track.
Im using Action strings, strikes and session strings, i dont really have anything else, since it costs money.
Much money.
But i will check out albion 3 and if its good i will get it.
I will change the project and try to fit in other Fx etc., please keep being around so i can hit you up!
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Brado
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So my take is to lead this on that way...though I know that is a bit 'radical' idea...:-)
Handshake, Danke
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Lets do this like tomorrow, okay? i need your computer ID as well.
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I mean, i would really appreciate the libraries, but i dont know how you could "give" them to me. :D
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Peace.
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After the flute does it's solo, bring in those strings sound from the beginning, making them slightly more aggressive, note wise. Then go from there. That's all I have for now, if I come up with some other ideas, I'll let you know. But, very nice work thus far!
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