A classy and elegant outro track for an album. I love the minimalism of the arrangement and yet how the piece really pulls you in. The F# Maj is an inspired chord choice that adds a lovely resolution to the end of every second bar. You should be quite proud of this one.
- The clappy finger snaps don't convince me. I would go for a real, organic sound.
- There seems to be a de-essing problem. I hear a lot hissing from 0:29 onwards. It is very distracting. I recommend to EQ-sweep the corresponing spots to detect the problematic frequencies of the singer. Then reduce the "s" and "t" sounds by hand (-5dB to -10 dB, or so) and, additionally, de-ess further using the EQ- frequencies (super narrow cuts, -5dB to -10dB again). It is not an exact science, so play around until the pain in your ears is gone.
- I think the reverb is a little too roomy/boxy. I would try and make it more ethereal. It could be an idea to (sidechain-)duck it behind the vocals, so it comes up once the vocal rang out.
- Check your LUFS. I would not go beyond -9 dB.
- If you are aiming at TV (I think this is very licensable and you would be in business soon), create a clean version (no n-word, f-word,...), too. Make sure everyone has their ducks in a row before submitting to a library or supervisor - i.e. everyone has their PRO membership sorted and all split sheets etc. have been signed. Also, make sure no one uploaded it to Spotify, CDBaby, Distrokid and such and clicked a monetization, administration, or publishing button - an absolute no-no if you want to earn money in film/TV, because your track needs to be unencumbered.
Overall, a very cool track and not much more has to be done in my opinion. If you can produce like this, you should be able to earn good money in TV licensing. Good luck with it!
This is a raw track, I recorded it for inspiration, I probably need to work with the vocal volume, and the text is in the track, you need to press the "lyrics" button, although the automatic translation does not differ in the accuracy of conveying the meaning. Well, if in general it's about love, as in general it is in all songs)
I would like to know what it says in english..... It was a little rough in the beginning, volume wise... But the melody in which you were singing it was very nice
Hey dude, nice sounding track! But this really need some good mixing and mastering, it sound so crowded on my monitors. If you want I can help you... Just let me know in case
bro this was written in 2012... Not really going back to older beats to fix them.... They were all a part of my journey.... The good, the bad, the ugly.... Check out some that I recently posted... Im always up for collabs
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Production:
- I think the kick is too loud, try -5dB.
- The clappy finger snaps don't convince me. I would go for a real, organic sound.
- There seems to be a de-essing problem. I hear a lot hissing from 0:29 onwards. It is very distracting. I recommend to EQ-sweep the corresponing spots to detect the problematic frequencies of the singer. Then reduce the "s" and "t" sounds by hand (-5dB to -10 dB, or so) and, additionally, de-ess further using the EQ- frequencies (super narrow cuts, -5dB to -10dB again). It is not an exact science, so play around until the pain in your ears is gone.
- I think the reverb is a little too roomy/boxy. I would try and make it more ethereal. It could be an idea to (sidechain-)duck it behind the vocals, so it comes up once the vocal rang out.
- Check your LUFS. I would not go beyond -9 dB.
- If you are aiming at TV (I think this is very licensable and you would be in business soon), create a clean version (no n-word, f-word,...), too. Make sure everyone has their ducks in a row before submitting to a library or supervisor - i.e. everyone has their PRO membership sorted and all split sheets etc. have been signed. Also, make sure no one uploaded it to Spotify, CDBaby, Distrokid and such and clicked a monetization, administration, or publishing button - an absolute no-no if you want to earn money in film/TV, because your track needs to be unencumbered.
Overall, a very cool track and not much more has to be done in my opinion. If you can produce like this, you should be able to earn good money in TV licensing. Good luck with it!
Tom/CTWF
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amazing vocals and the beat is so calming and soothing
nice job
:D
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