Don't worry I'm 15 and I'm doing as well as u are, but your beat is too repetitive. U need to make more interesting buildups and have some parts where u let the melody play alone or have some parts where u remove something and u let it play so u get more excited for the drop and don't get annoyed by repeating, but anyways great job!
on Trap synth by DoubleDan
on Music Box by UUU1
on Gucci Bells by EliteSCartists
i am 13 yo, sorry