As Cabaso said, you've definitely got some raw talent, which (if you want to improve) needs some training. I think what Cabaso was really pointing out was that there are one or two 'bum notes' in the acapella (I rejected about 50% of the acapella due to integral sections being out of key), which seem to be caused by your inability to really nail the vocal ornamentation that you're going for.
It's not the end of the world and it doesn't make you a bad singer. I'm a guitarist (mostly) and it's just like when I can't quite nail a technical riff due to hitting the wrong fret in the line or not getting a pitch bend just right. It just means that I'm not quite there yet and I'm probably rushing beyond my current ability.
So, what I do is slow it down to a point that I can nail it every time and then increase the speed a little until I'm not quite getting it, then take it down a notch again and repeat the process. Eventually, I can nail what I originally wanted.
In any case, what I did get out of your acapella, I am really happy with. I'm REALLY looking forward to see what you come up with in the future and how you progress as a vocalist.
thank you! I really appreciate you taking the time to give me your feedback! I plan on seeking training after I get out of highschool just fyi. I love what you did with the acapella by the way!!
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I used your acapella in this track:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/137564
https://soundcloud.com/deadstringer/when-it-rains-ft-isaiah-page
As Cabaso said, you've definitely got some raw talent, which (if you want to improve) needs some training. I think what Cabaso was really pointing out was that there are one or two 'bum notes' in the acapella (I rejected about 50% of the acapella due to integral sections being out of key), which seem to be caused by your inability to really nail the vocal ornamentation that you're going for.
It's not the end of the world and it doesn't make you a bad singer. I'm a guitarist (mostly) and it's just like when I can't quite nail a technical riff due to hitting the wrong fret in the line or not getting a pitch bend just right. It just means that I'm not quite there yet and I'm probably rushing beyond my current ability.
So, what I do is slow it down to a point that I can nail it every time and then increase the speed a little until I'm not quite getting it, then take it down a notch again and repeat the process. Eventually, I can nail what I originally wanted.
In any case, what I did get out of your acapella, I am really happy with. I'm REALLY looking forward to see what you come up with in the future and how you progress as a vocalist.
Thanks for sharing and I hope you like the track!
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on I Wont Give Up - Dry Edition by Lodderup
Here's mine: http://youtu.be/QEzajetglZ0
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I checked it out, and .... awesome! luv it