Bro I see the direction your going in. I fucking love it. But you need to go harder with that type of mixing, the scratching noise in the beginning needs some distortion and a fat ass compressor, making it scream into your ears without hurting, then add some more high frequencies to the piano after. this would create an amazing switch from the dirty nasty to the beautiful and blissfull. I love your track and think the creative idea behind it is amazing. Please keep going, I think ur onto sum
on whole track - 3 parts with different styles by ShawnZuspaet
https://youtu.be/CpIgDkIj1mE