NESMANGA

HAHA Only just seen this one today mate. Hope your ok Bruv.

I don't think you gonna learn anything from me. Go join a rap battle in person on stage and see how far you get. Because I doubt you would last longer then 5 mins with your stuff at present. Go do the rap Olympics, Perhaps that's the only way your gonna improve.

Words and phrases that almost rhyme with the word Breakfast.

2 syllables:
bedfast, breakfasts, cellist, chemist, dentist, exes, exit, fairest, feckless, freshest, headfast, headless, hectic, jealous, leftist, lettuce, lexis, lexus, memphis, menace, necklace, neckless, nexis, nexus, pleasant, plexus, precious, preface, present, reckless, second, selfish, sexist, stedfast, tempest, tennis, tetris, texas, wettest, wreckage

3 syllables:
alexis, apprenticed, connected, embarrassed, expected, infectious, projectile, prospectus

4 syllables:
biochemist, solar plexus

You choose "Make yeah tap yeah feet" That does not even come close to a rhyme. Are you even trying? You need consistency with rhyming on cymbals so tight there like drum beats Dawg. All I'm thinking is Eminem went out of his way to get my feedback and I waste time with you. I must have really bad mental illness.

A+ For that

Oh watch this film I co produced when you get a chance. The music tracks I made all used loops from this website.

https://www.facebook.com/nesmangajackzoneentertainment/videos/1107091226005894/

Use this website for rhymes http://rhymezone.com/
Use this other website to swap words for others that mean the same thing to avoid repetition of same word over and over http://www.wordhippo.com/

There is a video of music visuals for this(somewhere).

https://soundcloud.com/fred-dawn/cute-and-depressed-vocal-version-feat-justin-st-charles

Try this website out buddy. It finds words that rhyme with others when you are stuck. It lists things for you by use of syllables automatically. http://rhymezone.com/

http://rhymezone.com/ Use this for writing raps down before recording from now on

Just because I have not been commenting on you stuff recently does not mean I did not like it. I used 2 of your older vocals / spoken word / tripped out poetry. But I can't share the music I made as its for a online web show that has standards of quality before posting. My last bunch of videos I posted with more professional presentation editing was over 2 years ago. I'm sure it will get uploaded eventually on Davids Facebook account as time goes on. You can watch previous episodes by going here:

https://www.facebook.com/cia.dave.3/media_set?set=vb.100003897683997&type=2

Anything numbered watch in the correct order. Each video is 20 mins, I get the feeling you will enjoy using this when doing your songs / vocals / poetry. A bunch of us at NES MANGA TV had a laugh saying your slowly becoming the voice of our web show. But it actually be true if you still posting content on here.

My fan page which also links people to that that video channel is also here:

https://www.facebook.com/nesmangajackzoneentertainment/?fref=ts

Have a great day dude. Oh and I am still trying to sell my own music at present to another record company. I'll keep you posted on that lol.

Gold Star, A+, extra credit, get out or free jail card and all that Jazz.

Loved it. A+ Bruv

What does Hennessy taste like? If you don't know then don't rap about it. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hennessy

Have you heard this yet? https://soundcloud.com/cia-dave/exfain-golden-days-c-i-a-dave-remix-vocal-version

Exfain is another looperman account holder and the rapper is someone called DONNIEOZONE also on this site. Someone called C I A Dave did this remix

Love it mate :)

Gold Star for Effort and doing something original (Nes Manga)

THIS IS GOLD!

NICE MAN TRANCE VOCAL. BUT YOU KIND OF RUINED IT WITH THE DRUM BEAT AT THE END. I WOULD NEVER USE THIS FOR A COMMERCIAL RELEASE IN ANY SHAPE OR WAY AS THAT SOUNDS UNPROFESSIONAL. LOL don't flatter yourself mate, you got to have sharper sounding acapellas (Nes Manga)

It's not funny, go back to comedy writing school and learn to write better.

LOVED IT MATE! VERY HARD HOUSE! RESPECT!

I AM SLOWLY BUILDING UP THIS COLLECTION OF RANDOM THINGS YOU SUBMITTED ON MY HARD DRIVE LOL