I don't think you gonna learn anything from me. Go join a rap battle in person on stage and see how far you get. Because I doubt you would last longer then 5 mins with your stuff at present. Go do the rap Olympics, Perhaps that's the only way your gonna improve.
You are right, I will not learn from you but I will respond to your comment. When it comes to battle rap I can hold my own you don't want to see that New5ense you don't him. Also, finding words that rhyme together doesn't make a song great. I can make a whole song where nothing rhymes and the timing is off and people will love every minute of it. So, I take it you must be some kind of expert when it comes to writing and poetry but its a little far-fetched to say Eminem comes to you for your feedback. I find that questionable and your credibility diminish-able hence these are five word syllables.
New5ense
You choose "Make yeah tap yeah feet" That does not even come close to a rhyme. Are you even trying? You need consistency with rhyming on cymbals so tight there like drum beats Dawg. All I'm thinking is Eminem went out of his way to get my feedback and I waste time with you. I must have really bad mental illness.
Use this website for rhymes http://rhymezone.com/
Use this other website to swap words for others that mean the same thing to avoid repetition of same word over and over http://www.wordhippo.com/
Try this website out buddy. It finds words that rhyme with others when you are stuck. It lists things for you by use of syllables automatically. http://rhymezone.com/
Just because I have not been commenting on you stuff recently does not mean I did not like it. I used 2 of your older vocals / spoken word / tripped out poetry. But I can't share the music I made as its for a online web show that has standards of quality before posting. My last bunch of videos I posted with more professional presentation editing was over 2 years ago. I'm sure it will get uploaded eventually on Davids Facebook account as time goes on. You can watch previous episodes by going here:
Anything numbered watch in the correct order. Each video is 20 mins, I get the feeling you will enjoy using this when doing your songs / vocals / poetry. A bunch of us at NES MANGA TV had a laugh saying your slowly becoming the voice of our web show. But it actually be true if you still posting content on here.
My fan page which also links people to that that video channel is also here:
What club? When people say stuff like "Rock This Club" I think what club are you talking about?
Do you even go to clubs? If so which ones?
If you asked me Id tell you two places:
Ministry Of Sounds The Gallery Club in London
or Fire in London.
Can you not describe a club you actually visited if you even went to one.
I listen to everything you make. This vocal sounds like you just copying every other generic boring shit you heard of the radio, the kind of shit people don't actually play in clubs.
If you want sing about being in a club fair enough.
But I recommend you describe why he club is good because your now on the road of singing about stuff you don't know and it does not sound genuine.
So unless you know something mind blowing to tell the older types in the club with a drink in the hand your words are going through one ear out the other.
You have already sung shit like this before over and over.
How many tunes did you get out of it?
If you was making big money, fair enough. But if you really want to challenge yourself describe IN GREAT DETAIL, why I want to rock this club.
Here is a website to take look at to help with lyrics also.
These pellas are for promotional/ commercial use therefore, they have to be paid for . If you are REALLY interested use my email, pay and you ll get the clean HD files. Thank you
This does nothing for me, this is shit. Sorry, id rather you repeat making gold then shit like the one I commented on as gold that you made. This sounds like crap music you think people wanna hear. (Nez Manga)
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New5ense
on feelin like that by new5ense
2 syllables:
bedfast, breakfasts, cellist, chemist, dentist, exes, exit, fairest, feckless, freshest, headfast, headless, hectic, jealous, leftist, lettuce, lexis, lexus, memphis, menace, necklace, neckless, nexis, nexus, pleasant, plexus, precious, preface, present, reckless, second, selfish, sexist, stedfast, tempest, tennis, tetris, texas, wettest, wreckage
3 syllables:
alexis, apprenticed, connected, embarrassed, expected, infectious, projectile, prospectus
4 syllables:
biochemist, solar plexus
You choose "Make yeah tap yeah feet" That does not even come close to a rhyme. Are you even trying? You need consistency with rhyming on cymbals so tight there like drum beats Dawg. All I'm thinking is Eminem went out of his way to get my feedback and I waste time with you. I must have really bad mental illness.
on Consider Yourself by Shamoozey
on Consider Yourself by Shamoozey
on Mayo Walk by mike0112
https://www.facebook.com/nesmangajackzoneentertainment/videos/1107091226005894/
on Mayo Walk by mike0112
Use this other website to swap words for others that mean the same thing to avoid repetition of same word over and over http://www.wordhippo.com/
on Make Me Sound Sexy by Shamoozey
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http://rhymezone.com/
on Dope Man by Shamoozey
https://www.facebook.com/cia.dave.3/media_set?set=vb.100003897683997&type=2
Anything numbered watch in the correct order. Each video is 20 mins, I get the feeling you will enjoy using this when doing your songs / vocals / poetry. A bunch of us at NES MANGA TV had a laugh saying your slowly becoming the voice of our web show. But it actually be true if you still posting content on here.
My fan page which also links people to that that video channel is also here:
https://www.facebook.com/nesmangajackzoneentertainment/?fref=ts
Have a great day dude. Oh and I am still trying to sell my own music at present to another record company. I'll keep you posted on that lol.
on Rock this club by Mrshammi
Do you even go to clubs? If so which ones?
If you asked me Id tell you two places:
Ministry Of Sounds The Gallery Club in London
or Fire in London.
Can you not describe a club you actually visited if you even went to one.
I listen to everything you make. This vocal sounds like you just copying every other generic boring shit you heard of the radio, the kind of shit people don't actually play in clubs.
If you want sing about being in a club fair enough.
But I recommend you describe why he club is good because your now on the road of singing about stuff you don't know and it does not sound genuine.
So unless you know something mind blowing to tell the older types in the club with a drink in the hand your words are going through one ear out the other.
You have already sung shit like this before over and over.
How many tunes did you get out of it?
If you was making big money, fair enough. But if you really want to challenge yourself describe IN GREAT DETAIL, why I want to rock this club.
Here is a website to take look at to help with lyrics also.
rhymezone.com
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Exfain is another looperman account holder and the rapper is someone called DONNIEOZONE also on this site. Someone called C I A Dave did this remix
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