Cheers! I can tell you're fairly inexperienced. There is a basic song structure here but it doesn't change much. The same chord progression through the whole song gets a bit repetitive. There's not much ambiance so it sounds bland. Especially for a 3 min song, changing it up is a must. Not hating, just giving a head up.
on New Bag by OG7even
https://soundcloud.com/sopromgame/og7even-new-bag
on Above the clouds by 0Equinox0
https://soundcloud.com/sopromgame/equinox-above-the-clouds-prod-qwonky