There is so much going on here, It's all overwhelming. There are parts that clipping, The changes in the track are random and the general flow of the track is hard to grasp. Maybe watch some videos on song construction, it may help. That's just my opinion.
on Equinox - Last One To Die by 0Equinox0
https://soundcloud.com/piilu-pardu/last-one-to-die-feat-0equinox0-prod-piilu
on Above the clouds by 0Equinox0
https://soundcloud.com/piilu-pardu/trip-above-the-clouds-feat-0equinox0
on You are my friend by NYELA1